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Oasis in a desert that's what you are to me. A refreshing calm in chaos. You soothe my spirit. You are my shelter from the storm. You are but raindrops in unforgivable drought; my bright shining star. (Yalto) Date written: 06/13/2020 "Yalto" is a form invented by yours truly Lines 1-15: 3,4,2,4,5,3,2,3,2,3,3,5,6,1,5 syllables

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Date: 6/13/2020 1:09:00 PM
Hello Edward, a very simple poem so beautifully written. Enjoy your day my friend.
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Edward Ibeh
Date: 6/13/2020 1:19:00 PM
Thank you so much, Darlene:-) Glad you liked it!
Date: 6/13/2020 10:08:00 AM
Simply beautiful--a true oasis of love!
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Edward Ibeh
Date: 6/13/2020 12:13:00 PM
Thank you so much, Vijay:-)

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