OAHU RECOLLECTIONS

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*kuene (kwen-ay) - Hawaiian for waiter

the serendipitous lobster bib tied ‘round big kahuna’s neck kuene stumble over* him dab his chin monkeys gaze at him from behind glass pearl city memories that shine e l s e w h e r e is the diner two scoop choice served with teriyaki steak or shrimp tempura out of towners paying money to find out the size of a single pearl near Hanauma Bay p a s t is present in wet seas aloha the day e v e r y fragrant lei ebbing, flowing precious Oahu recollections

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Paige Hind

Date: 3/11/2024 5:51:00 PM

Gorgeous writing and flow, a pleasure to read-

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 3/11/2024 5:58:00 PM

Thank you, Paige! :)

Silent One

Date: 3/9/2024 11:20:00 AM

Very interesting formatting of your poem... nicely done..

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 3/9/2024 6:17:00 PM

Thank you, Silent! Wherever my muse goes!

Ghairo Daniels

Date: 3/8/2024 10:26:00 PM

Stunningly simple, crystal clear, draws one into Hawaii immediately x

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 3/9/2024 6:18:00 PM

Awesome! Thank you, Ghairo!

Yann Rolland

Date: 3/8/2024 5:09:00 PM

i would so much like this country ??? what a gracious poem, end so creative, thanks kIm

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 3/9/2024 6:19:00 PM

Thank you, Yann! Glad you liked the ending too!

Daniel Henry Rodgers

Date: 3/8/2024 4:13:00 PM

Dear Kim, I love how you capture the essence of Oahu's charm and nostalgia. The imagery of the serendipitous lobster bib and the bustling diner evokes a sense of warmth and longing for the memories of Pearl City. Your poetic words dance with the rhythm of the islands, cherished moments and vibrant experiences. Kim, this such a delightful glimpse into Oahu through your poetry. - Blessings, Daniel

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 3/9/2024 6:20:00 PM

Thank you, Daniel! I lived there for 3 years when I was in the Navy 1980’s. :)