Notes About The Poem

*kuene (kwen-ay) - Hawaiian for waiter

OAHU RECOLLECTIONS

the serendipitous lobster
bib
tied
‘round big kahuna’s neck

kuene stumble over*
him
dab
his chin

monkeys
gaze at him
from
behind glass

pearl
city
memories
that shine

e
l
s
e
w
h
e
r
e

is the diner
two
scoop
choice

served with
teriyaki
steak
or
shrimp
tempura

out of towners
paying
money
to find out
the size

of a single
pearl
near
Hanauma Bay

p a s t
is
present
in
wet seas

aloha the day
e
v
e
r
y
fragrant lei
ebbing, flowing
 precious
  Oahu recollections
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Hind Avatar
March 11, 2024 at 5:51 PM
Gorgeous writing and flow, a pleasure to read-
Rodrigues Avatar
March 11, 2024 at 5:58 PM
Thank you, Paige! :)
One Avatar
March 9, 2024 at 11:20 AM
Very interesting formatting of your poem... nicely done..
Rodrigues Avatar
March 9, 2024 at 6:17 PM
Thank you, Silent! Wherever my muse goes!
Daniels Avatar
March 8, 2024 at 10:26 PM
Stunningly simple, crystal clear, draws one into Hawaii immediately x
Rodrigues Avatar
March 9, 2024 at 6:18 PM
Awesome! Thank you, Ghairo!
Rolland Avatar
March 8, 2024 at 5:09 PM
i would so much like this country ??? what a gracious poem, end so creative, thanks kIm
Rodrigues Avatar
March 9, 2024 at 6:19 PM
Thank you, Yann! Glad you liked the ending too!
Rodgers Avatar
March 8, 2024 at 4:13 PM
Dear Kim, I love how you capture the essence of Oahu's charm and nostalgia. The imagery of the serendipitous lobster bib and the bustling diner evokes a sense of warmth and longing for the memories of Pearl City. Your poetic words dance with the rhythm of the islands, cherished moments and vibrant experiences. Kim, this such a delightful glimpse into Oahu through your poetry. - Blessings, Daniel
Rodrigues Avatar
March 9, 2024 at 6:20 PM
Thank you, Daniel! I lived there for 3 years when I was in the Navy 1980’s. :)
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