Kim Rodrigues Poet Free verse

O What a Pleasant Morning

fine pOwder
      O
what a pleasant
mOrning
  intake
cOffee
    eee…ew
keep the dOOr
     clOsed
  bathe
the steps & car
   thOse
hazardous
areas
   the mat
underfOOt
  handle
that can drive
   yOur nOse
        craz…eee
               O
what blOOming
   daffOdils
      willOws
         wisteria
bradfOrd pears
              O
          my
   eyes
see
     flOaters
      flOtsam
  pOllen  I thOught
swiping at my hair
  nOt gnats   drats
strangers   with wings
               O
           Spring
   we sing
sOngs of thee
  hutchOO
  and
eee…ew
  sO
beautiful
     tOOdOOlOO
            tO the cOld
   sOlidly sOld
On glOrifying cOlOrs
  hutchOO   eee…ew
                    O
                my
         Spring’s
dreadfully  beautiful

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Trina Layne April 4, 2025 at 10:13 AM OO so very delightful. Congratulations Kim! Kim Rodrigues April 4, 2025 at 11:23 AM O! Thank you, sweet Trina!

Edward Ibeh April 4, 2025 at 8:21 AM Oh, I love this one, Kim! It's like comfort food to the soul. Very ingenious. Congratulations! Kim Rodrigues April 4, 2025 at 8:29 AM Thank you so much!!

CayCay Godwin April 2, 2025 at 1:53 PM You put on your clever and went to funky town where you picked up, packaged and next delivered a fun, entertaining and clever time to all. OOOO indeed, never thought to ever even think about the possible effects of OOOOO - loved them. Had a good time here ... CayCay Kim Rodrigues April 2, 2025 at 2:39 PM You make my day…O O O yes U dO ;) Hugs

Oliver Mckeithan April 2, 2025 at 12:29 PM Like this Kim. Like the way you use the o's and fill in a delightful poem around them Kim Rodrigues April 2, 2025 at 1:29 PM Thank yOu, O-liver ;)

Anne-Lise Andresen April 2, 2025 at 11:27 AM - Playfully written, Kim ... spring is my favorite time... wonderful :) - hugs Kim Rodrigues April 2, 2025 at 12:13 PM It is fun to see everything blooming! Thank you, Anne-Lise! :)

Akham Nilabirdhwaja Singh April 2, 2025 at 6:19 AM Spring both beautiful and dreadful,vibrant colors of life alongwith allergies and discomfort it brings.At last a true definition of spring.Likr it. Kim Rodrigues April 2, 2025 at 6:32 AM Thank you, Akham! Happy Spring!