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O What a Pleasant Morning

fine pOwder
      O
what a pleasant
mOrning
  intake
cOffee
    eee…ew
keep the dOOr
     clOsed
  bathe
the steps & car
   thOse
hazardous
areas
   the mat
underfOOt
  handle
that can drive
   yOur nOse
        craz…eee
               O
what blOOming
   daffOdils
      willOws
         wisteria
bradfOrd pears
              O
          my
   eyes
see
     flOaters
      flOtsam
  pOllen  I thOught
swiping at my hair
  nOt gnats   drats
strangers   with wings
               O
           Spring
   we sing
sOngs of thee
  hutchOO
  and
eee…ew
  sO
beautiful
     tOOdOOlOO
            tO the cOld
   sOlidly sOld
On glOrifying cOlOrs
  hutchOO   eee…ew
                    O
                my
         Spring’s
dreadfully  beautiful

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Trina Layne

Date: 4/4/2025 10:13:00 AM

OO so very delightful. Congratulations Kim!

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 4/4/2025 11:23:00 AM

O! Thank you, sweet Trina!

Edward Ibeh

Date: 4/4/2025 8:21:00 AM

Oh, I love this one, Kim! It's like comfort food to the soul. Very ingenious. Congratulations!

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 4/4/2025 8:29:00 AM

Thank you so much!!

CayCay Jennings

Date: 4/2/2025 1:53:00 PM

You put on your clever and went to funky town where you picked up, packaged and next delivered a fun, entertaining and clever time to all. OOOO indeed, never thought to ever even think about the possible effects of OOOOO - loved them. Had a good time here ... CayCay

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 4/2/2025 2:39:00 PM

You make my day…O O O yes U dO ;) Hugs