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O To Swim In Memories

When came for a swim In what looked to me like dream, Water nor worries, We swam in old memories, Or so did it seem. ____________________________________ Tanka | 07.09.13 | Poet's note: This Tanka of five lines alternates a 3-7-3-7-3 scheme.

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Date: 6/17/2020 5:39:00 AM
memory- the pregnant ocean; happy swimming there is!
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Date: 4/9/2020 8:24:00 AM
To recollect and get lost in memories bring us a feeling that makes our hearts float in reverie. A short poem that carves a deep hallow in the soul. Brilliant as ever.
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Aniruddha Pathak
Date: 6/17/2020 1:44:00 AM
I liked the way you've looked at the poem, thanks for such beautiful comments.

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