Aniruddha Pathak Poet Tanka

O To Swim In Memories

When came for a swim
In what looked to me like dream,
Water nor worries, 
We swam in old memories,
Or so did it seem. 
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    Tanka | 07.09.13 | 

Poet's note: This Tanka of five lines alternates a 3-7-3-7-3 scheme.

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Mahtab Bangalee June 17, 2020 at 5:39 AM memory- the pregnant ocean; happy swimming there is!

JC Brul April 9, 2020 at 8:24 AM To recollect and get lost in memories bring us a feeling that makes our hearts float in reverie. A short poem that carves a deep hallow in the soul. Brilliant as ever. Aniruddha Pathak June 17, 2020 at 1:44 AM I liked the way you've looked at the poem, thanks for such beautiful comments.