Jacob Wölf Poet Concrete

O' the Unknown Saviour

coming
  ever so slowly
               hiding  
                       from me
                              begging
                                    of thee
                                please
                       come and 
                    help 
                me 
             I am                                
                    lost in                        
                             the forest afar
                                          bleeding 
                                                    out sin
                                                           pulling
                                                                 life back in
                                                         oh please
                                                        hurry
                                  O' unknown saviour
                            i am in need of thee  
                                   

it is a concrete poem because its confusing unknown shape fits the poem.....Enjoy!

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Jay Loveless September 23, 2009 at 10:42 AM Im......i....gosh...this is...beautiful, and breath taking. Jacob wolf, you are making it hard not to cry with this one. emotion pent up and ready to fall. this one makes me need to write. ill write a 'responce' poem to it. and when its perfect ill post it and mail you the name