O' the Unknown Saviour
coming
ever so slowly
hiding
from me
begging
of thee
please
come and
help
me
I am
lost in
the forest afar
bleeding
out sin
pulling
life back in
oh please
hurry
O' unknown saviour
i am in need of thee
it is a concrete poem because its confusing unknown shape fits the poem.....Enjoy!
Copyright © Jacob Wölf | Year Posted 2008
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