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O, the Dripping Sadness

Shattered and mangled are my wings, Forlorn is my trembling heartbroken soul; I am crushed and humbled, torn apart, Life has left me broken and lost. O, listen to my weeping. I have followed the vine of my life, Each delicate leaf has been a treasure; Twining through the chapters of my journey; Each sadness is a poem to be written. O, wipe away my tears. The vine leads me down a winding road, To names engraved in stone for eternity; But each sadness has given my soul a voice, Sorrow and pain drip from my pen. O, the dripping sadness. ___________________________________ September 28, 2013 Poetry/Verse/O, The Dripping Sadness Copyright Protected, ID 09-508-783-28 All Rights Reserved, 2013, Constance La France

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Date: 11/6/2013 8:21:00 PM
lovely win... Love ~SKAT~
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Date: 11/1/2013 5:19:00 PM
The last line makes a great refrain! Congrad's on your win. Light & Love
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Date: 11/1/2013 7:35:00 AM
Congratulations on your win , excellent xx
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Date: 10/31/2013 12:21:00 PM
Great emotion expressed in this winning work..Congrats..Sara
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Date: 10/30/2013 8:12:00 PM
what a great poem penned to perfection...one can feel this one for sure...congrats on your win :)
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Date: 10/30/2013 1:21:00 PM
this is so amazing , it is a feeling of reading something well done from the past ..Congratulations , A winner !
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Date: 10/30/2013 4:43:00 AM
- Congratulations on your winning poem B.W! - Pleased to read good poetry .... Really well written! - Thank you. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 10/29/2013 9:12:00 PM
congratulation....luv~ PD
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Date: 10/29/2013 8:37:00 PM
Very emotional and deeply heartfelt verses. I really like the unique style. Well done :)
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Date: 10/29/2013 8:24:00 PM
Congratulations! I love your form. Well done!
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