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O Sweet Bliss

Oh sweet bliss... You found me in darkness enshrined Sadness collecting like copper pennies In a fountain of aging lines With each new alliance Connections eluded to flavor's waxing bland Reminiscent of tasteless compliance And refusing loves fervent advance Each intriguing and precious If judged in a mirrored light But in those elements missing Prophesied sorrow of wanting's plight Then oh bliss you granted me flight A wandering albatross floating On currents of his gentle affection Wings spread sunward and doting The flavor of loves sweet delight Now I savor your taste oh bliss His kiss that alights upon my lips A breathless Sunlight in mornings mist Strong in love that came so late This heart of mine he owns I feared for time that blessed fate The purest bliss I've ever known

Copyright © | Year Posted 2013




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Date: 11/20/2013 7:30:00 AM
sweet beautifully penned piece
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Sarai Virden
Date: 11/22/2013 2:27:00 AM
Thank you sweet Liam
Date: 11/19/2013 5:20:00 PM
Absolutely gorgeous lines... "On currents of his gentle affection Wings spread sunward and doting" You are fast becoming one of my favourite writers of love. You have a soft tender heart my dear sweet Sarai! You are special... warm hugs my sweet!
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Sarai Virden
Date: 11/22/2013 2:25:00 AM
Oh Jack you know your my fav. Hugs to you daily!
Date: 11/19/2013 9:30:00 AM
What a ride. This was very touching and deeply honest. Your heart shines strong.
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Sarai Virden
Date: 11/19/2013 10:02:00 AM
Thank you Drake.... Deep calls to deep That why you always get it Hugs

Book: Shattered Sighs