O' Shepherdess Fair!

O’ Fair shepherdess! What a misery swept!
A lover, a selfless lover you have lost
Why don’t you speak? You haven’t yet wept.
Thus the shepherdess replied, “It’s not my fault”

His death hasn’t moved you, shame!
You are unmoved by the loss of your lover
You treat him as if he were a stranger
Thus she replied, “I am not to blame “

“Yes, not his love but I grieve him aloof 
He had shared so many other lasses
They would be sharing the same feelings  
Unfortunately,” I have no proof”

“Ask any shepherdess around any lane
He loved far and wide, suffice it to say.
Of his unfaithfulness,  I drove him away
Therefore," I will show no shame”.

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Honorable Mention

Contest: Four sentences
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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Guzzi Avatar
June 27, 2010 at 5:05 PM
hmmmm...good win but I hope not self portrsit? :) Light & Love
K. Avatar
June 26, 2010 at 8:22 AM
What a very unique take on those 4 sentences, Dr. Ram--I really enjoyed the story involved here--I could just imagine it quite vividly too--congrats on your win with this --nikko :)
Mascarenhas Avatar
June 25, 2010 at 4:47 AM
congratulations on your win dr. cheers oscar
Brown Avatar
June 24, 2010 at 5:21 AM
Congratulations DR on your win in Paula Swanson's contest "Four Sentences". Love, Carol
Taylor Avatar
June 22, 2010 at 9:18 PM
Congrats on your HM Dr Ram. Nice going. ...Ralph
Dietrich Avatar
June 22, 2010 at 7:38 PM
I really liked this, Dr. Ram. Congrats on the HM. Luv, Andrea
Cobb Avatar
June 21, 2010 at 12:01 PM
very intriquing write my good man. i enjoyed it. great use of words.
Bloomsfield Avatar
June 21, 2010 at 7:35 AM
Just Wonderful,hope i find mre time to read mre of your gems here!Celene!
Falotico Avatar
June 21, 2010 at 7:05 AM
wow.. Dr R. wonderful write with such a great word usage and flow. Michael
Clark Avatar
June 21, 2010 at 4:25 AM
Awesome write DRM, Great entry and a winner in my voice! Best Jeralynn
Knop Avatar
June 21, 2010 at 3:26 AM
Excellent poem, Dr. Ram. Good luck in the contest and thank you for all your kind comments...Gert
Horsman Avatar
June 21, 2010 at 2:06 AM
awesome poem, one of the best i've read in poetry soup, thanks for your comments on my writing also harry
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June 20, 2010 at 7:11 PM
Creative way to approach the contest! Interesting use of conversation to bring this poem to life. Best wishes in the contest. Thank you for your kind comment. Karen
Devonshire Avatar
June 20, 2010 at 6:59 PM
My heart goes out to this shepherdess, Dr. Ram. When she's says she has "no proof," however, I wonder if she may have been fed lies by other lasses who were jealous. Excellent story in rhyme! Love, Carolyn
Babcock Avatar
June 20, 2010 at 6:19 PM
Good Luck in the contest. God Bless Phyl
Culverhouse Avatar
June 20, 2010 at 5:46 PM
great story, enjoyed, thanks for reading my work!
Conway Avatar
June 20, 2010 at 5:27 PM
Very nice-Good luck in the contest!~Tirzah~
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