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O Santa I Want You To Remember

Oh Dear Santa, Please, please, i want you not to forget, 
Again! 

Don’t forget how good they were when they picked me up when I fell,
Don’t forget how they helped me while I never helped them,
Don’t forget how giving they were when I had nothing. 

I didn’t have anything to give, help them with, I never saw them fall 

Oh Santa! Please, please don’t forget them,
They were good while I wasn’t 



(Written for a contest...)

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Arturo Michael Date: 12/24/2017 5:29:00 AM I want to wish you a dream come true on this Christmas day...and to thank you for being a friend here...It's a blessing to share poetry with you...again...I wish you a dream come true, Antonia Login to Reply Unfamiliar Flower Date: 12/25/2017 12:06:00 AM Thank you so much... thank you for being a friend here too and I’m glad we get to share poetry. Wishing you a merry Christmas and many happiness for you and your family... thank you for your wishes again

James Inman Date: 12/9/2017 1:50:00 AM Antonia, the contests are a great way to get exposure for your poems. This one is sad (sounds like family), insight comes quite often with experience. We see things differently as we age. Login to Reply Unfamiliar Flower Date: 12/9/2017 4:15:00 PM I’m glad you got part of the idea of the poem. I really appreciate when readers understand my poems. And I agree age plays a great role in how we see things. Thank you for your comment and visit :)

Silent One Date: 12/8/2017 5:23:00 AM A sad deep write... good luck in the contest.. Login to Reply Unfamiliar Flower Date: 12/9/2017 4:09:00 PM Thank you :)

Lewis Raynes Date: 12/7/2017 7:10:00 PM This is such a sad write Antonia, a lovely melancholic poem, great stuff :) Login to Reply Unfamiliar Flower Date: 12/9/2017 4:09:00 PM Thank you :)

Faraz Ajmal Date: 12/6/2017 9:19:00 AM A very nice written poem, I hope that you win the contest, well I m sure that by now you ll be sure that santa Clause isn t real, and the realization of it is never pleasant Login to Reply Unfamiliar Flower Date: 12/6/2017 10:34:00 AM Hahahaha I always knew he was fictional since you would see on the streets like a million of them lol hahha thanks not hoping to win just felt like joining a competition