Unfamiliar Flower Poet Free verse

O Santa I Want You To Remember

Oh Dear Santa, Please, please, i want you not to forget, 
Again! 

Don’t forget how good they were when they picked me up when I fell,
Don’t forget how they helped me while I never helped them,
Don’t forget how giving they were when I had nothing. 

I didn’t have anything to give, help them with, I never saw them fall 

Oh Santa! Please, please don’t forget them,
They were good while I wasn’t 



(Written for a contest...)

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Arturo Michael December 24, 2017 at 5:29 AM I want to wish you a dream come true on this Christmas day...and to thank you for being a friend here...It's a blessing to share poetry with you...again...I wish you a dream come true, Antonia Unfamiliar Flower December 25, 2017 at 12:06 AM Thank you so much... thank you for being a friend here too and I’m glad we get to share poetry. Wishing you a merry Christmas and many happiness for you and your family... thank you for your wishes again

James Inman December 9, 2017 at 1:50 AM Antonia, the contests are a great way to get exposure for your poems. This one is sad (sounds like family), insight comes quite often with experience. We see things differently as we age. Unfamiliar Flower December 9, 2017 at 4:15 PM I’m glad you got part of the idea of the poem. I really appreciate when readers understand my poems. And I agree age plays a great role in how we see things. Thank you for your comment and visit :)

Silent One December 8, 2017 at 5:23 AM A sad deep write... good luck in the contest.. Unfamiliar Flower December 9, 2017 at 4:09 PM Thank you :)

Lewis Raynes December 7, 2017 at 7:10 PM This is such a sad write Antonia, a lovely melancholic poem, great stuff :) Unfamiliar Flower December 9, 2017 at 4:09 PM Thank you :)

Faraz Ajmal December 6, 2017 at 9:19 AM A very nice written poem, I hope that you win the contest, well I m sure that by now you ll be sure that santa Clause isn t real, and the realization of it is never pleasant Unfamiliar Flower December 6, 2017 at 10:34 AM Hahahaha I always knew he was fictional since you would see on the streets like a million of them lol hahha thanks not hoping to win just felt like joining a competition