O' Pungent Blossom

I am going many places with this write in my head...lovely work Carrie.

A very thoughtful Senryu, Carrie.! I really like it. And thank you for your comment on poem Life is a Rose. Gert

Like the enigmatic flavour to this one Carrie.Rgds Brian & thanks for your welcome comments today

Interesting write. I could go several ways with this one. Sara

Thank you for your welcome comments today Carrie.Rgds Brian

This perfect Senryu seems to have many layers, Carrie. Whichever way one interprets it, it is a wonderful piece! Love, Robin

Thank you for sharing your excellent poetry with us Carrie. As always I wish you the best in your future writing endeavors whatever they may be. Love, Carol

Simple and soothing Carrie.Rgds Brian & thanks for your welcome comments

At least two ways to go on this one, a simple taste or romance in the making. Thanks for sharing this mystery. Sincerely Moses

Have you read the haiku "bite of my axe" this is the same caliber of the great poet Buson! both of your last two works are going into my fav's....:-)

this poem can be interpreted as the people (students) that come into our lives on a day to day bases. A reminder of our responsibility... no I've not painted this tree but maybe Ill try my hand at a write, on it. ( your work is a ninth inning shutout in a world series game and a game winning drive of a superbowl! --------both winners---------) your are a blessed writer. much love!

Wonderful Carrie, you are great senryu. You're expert hands penned a nice poem...Raul

Hmm, this could be an orange, an onion, many things? I like the fact that you leave us to choose the type of blossum with "your expert hands." Nice senryu, Carrie. Love, Carolyn

Hi Carrie A lovely Senryu that evokes ones imagination....A lot of sentiment in only three lines. Well done, beautiful! Take care Love Light Truth PatriciA