O' Pioneer

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Someone's calloused hands
pounded posts into earth’s clay
to circle the west
with stretched barbed wire, foresight
and faith in the horizon

Until fields were ripe
               with grain, furrowed brows, and with
                      deep seeded pride--



For Russell Sivey's Contest: "Mesh of forms" Tanka/Senryu
Carrie Richards 3/19/12
Copyright © | Year Posted 2012

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Brown Avatar
March 20, 2012 at 7:19 AM
Wishing you the best in Russell's contest Carrie. Love, Carol
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March 20, 2012 at 1:25 AM
Wonderful imagery, Carrie! I love the line "winds of hope ever blowing". I was thinking of the movie, Far and Away. Then, I read Andrea's comment. That made me laugh. Best wishes in the contest. Rhonda
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March 19, 2012 at 10:28 PM
Great job with this contest, Carrie. today I showed my students that finishing scene of the movie Far and Away, where the pioneers were racing for land in Oklahoma!! this poem reminds me of all the work they had to do once they got their free land.
Rhinem Avatar
March 19, 2012 at 6:51 PM
Ps. Smile ˜ Baby I'm-a Want You * Baby I'm-a Need You ˜ Your The Only One I Care Enough To Hurt About ˜ Maybe I'ma Crazy, But I Just Can't Live Without Your Love & Affection ˜ And Lately I'm-a Praying, That You'll Always Be-a Staying, Besiiiide Me :)
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March 19, 2012 at 7:41 PM
‡ ... "I Want You!" ... ‡
Arowolo Avatar
March 19, 2012 at 5:49 PM
Nice write,Carrie.Love the flow and rhymes on the penultimate line-"row by row,by furrowed brow". Good luck to you in the contest...
Rhinem Avatar
March 19, 2012 at 5:45 PM
Smile ˜ Sooo, That's What Happened, Your Pride Got In The Way? Hahaha ˜ That's Ok, I Still Love You Baby ˜ Forever & Always, John!:) *
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March 19, 2012 at 6:00 PM
....Sooo, Don't Forget That, Baby!:) ˜
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