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Dedicated to all those who find it difficult to talk about their emotions

 

 

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O my brother, I can see your pain. Unlike the ignorant, I hear your screams, yet you refuse to explain, why you're lost in forgotten fast flowing streams, wandering like a forgoing wave, thinking there's blessings in an early grave. When you can't understand the darkness, feeling as you do not belong, remember in our own unique weirdness, you don't have to pretend to be headstrong because my brother, I can see your pain. I know it hurts, because I've been hurt too sometimes we fall, as I've fallen too, but you need to realise - It's not wrong to not be strong, so remove your daily disguise. Stop living up to expectations from 'out of date' generations. It's OK not to be OK. and I'll help you find your way. Dad was sadly mistaken - it's fine to cry when you feel forsaken because my brother, I can see your pain. If you think there's too much shame, we'll sit in silence until you feel tame. It's hard to say what's on your mind, when reactions are not always kind. Then they ignite our dynamite hearts to make us feel as we're not worthy, so a piece of our sanity departs and the demons show no mercy. It's not absurd that so many are confused in their own little world. It's ok to cry, so release those tears, you are not a burden, so share your fears because my brother, I can feel your pain. We don't have to smile all the time, playing the joker is now a masculine crime. We can't live as a definition of our past, as fate won't wait - it moves too fast. We can only determine where we are going, when we process what we are not showing. We are iron monuments forged in fire, separate but born with burning desire. Waterfalls formed from the same rain, flowing from different mountainous terrain. A secret lullaby from two unheard tones, healing from wounds cast from selfish stones So in times of rage and feeling misunderstood, remember the beautiful bond of brotherhood because my brother, I can see your pain.

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Date: 5/26/2025 8:19:00 AM
Dear Silent One, the depth of your emotional insight and empathy shines in this beautiful, embracing poem. Your verses are a big hug of understanding and soul-sharing wrapped around one who needs to know that someone hears them and cares about them. The refrain of "because my brother, I can see your pain" underscores the intimacy of your words and deepens your personal reassurance to the one receiving your words. Belated congrats for POTD honors! Warmest wishes my inspiring friend.. ~Susan
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Date: 5/24/2025 12:59:00 PM
Belated congratulations dear friendly sweet poet! Great! Have a nice day, yours sincerely, AA.
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Date: 5/12/2025 4:12:00 AM
Of course this was a POTD, because why not? Sincerest congratulations, SO. Well-deserved!
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Date: 5/11/2025 10:11:00 AM
"It's not wrong to not be strong". These words should apply to all. We do not always have to be strong and hold back tears. It is okay to cry. A powerful message to men out there. love phyl
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Date: 5/9/2025 11:16:00 PM
Silent One, oh my gosh, I am in tears, this speaks VOLUMES to my heart right now. You are a master of words, this poem is such truth. If only my dear cousin could have read this poem, maybe it would have been the rope to help him hold on. You are so beautiful and precious to write this poem. I am in tears.
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Date: 5/9/2025 11:31:00 AM
Above all love..' Si and often we try to give it So we do..I know people who really loved me And they inflicted some of the worst pain quite Obliviously.' So we go on..All the best; at least' its All I can honestly offer.)
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Date: 5/9/2025 9:14:00 AM
Back with Congratulations on your POTD win. I loved reading your powerful write again. Have a blessed day with your wonderful win.............
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Date: 5/8/2025 12:41:00 PM
Simply brilliant straight from a loving compassionate brotherly heart! Well done and Congrats on POTD! Debx
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Date: 5/8/2025 12:21:00 PM
That is a lovely call out to other men, to let them know they are not alone. Congrats on POTD!
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Date: 5/8/2025 7:22:00 AM
Oh how awesome is this!!!! I would have loved to read this aloud and record it…it’s been so long since I’ve been on this app…I didn’t know we could do this. Wow, this poem was perfect timing even after the loss of my twin…thank you Silent One for leading me here!!
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Date: 5/7/2025 5:54:00 PM
Emotions of the heart are difficult to express for some. This is a beautiful, yet tender dedication to those in trying times. Yes, ' it's OK not to be OK. ' Your thoughts caress gently around me, Silent One. Congratulations on Poem of the Day. My best to you. Hugs, Brandy
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Date: 5/7/2025 3:07:00 PM
Congratulations, Dear Silent One, on your honour of POTD. When you write from your heart, doesn't really matter if you receive an accolade or not, you have done your part - you have inspired many, with deep thoughts, stunning imageries, and brilliant choice of words. Keep writing, Dear Friend, such great poems with heartfelt mission.
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Date: 5/8/2025 7:30:00 AM
To be honest the POTD accolade mean very little to me, as it is just an algorithm.... Thank you for your feedback and visit..
Date: 5/7/2025 2:02:00 PM
Hey, congrats!! I almost missed seeing this. Happy for you!! :D
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Date: 5/7/2025 11:37:00 AM
Back with congratulations on your POTD, Silent One! warm wishes
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Date: 5/7/2025 7:50:00 AM
Congrats on your POTD first class exposure of silent worthiness. Thanks for sharing! This poem really spoke out to me.
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Date: 5/7/2025 7:30:00 AM
Hello SO, I am back again to welcome you back and to congratulate you on POTD!! Yes, excellent writing! Spring Blessings, My Dear Friend, Daniel
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Date: 5/7/2025 6:36:00 AM
No wonder to see here, Silent One.. highly appreciated and rated.. Acknowledged and recognised as a poetcof great worth and with a humane mission in life.. Congratulations on your POTD honour! A well deserved distinction! Stay always blessed and gifted. God bless you. Best regards.
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Date: 5/7/2025 5:55:00 AM
Men rarely express their feelings but what you have penned is something very special and as you said to me I share your pain, so many wonderful lines but the one that stood out for me was "thinking there's blessings in an early grave" so many of us have reached that point in our lives but sadly some never get to share it. Thank you for writing this truly inspirational poem. Danny
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Date: 5/7/2025 5:04:00 AM
You've written a powerful and deeply moving poem, S.O. I truly understand the unbreakable bond between brothers--not just in blood, but in shared struggles and understanding. It deserves POTD. Congrats, my friend. (side note: if you get a chance, read my recent post, "A Journey Into Transformation". It's about loss of close brothers...thank you.)
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Date: 5/7/2025 4:56:00 AM
Back again with congratulations on POTD
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Date: 5/7/2025 4:14:00 AM
Wow. Excellent POTD . Congratulations. Yes, it is ok to cry and it is healing. More strength blooms. This loving poem is significant :)
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Date: 5/7/2025 3:28:00 AM
S.O., a powerful poem, congratulations on POTD.
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Date: 5/7/2025 3:08:00 AM
We can never know how a person truly feels inside. Sometimes hiding behind a smile. Such a powerful and important message in your poem. Well done. Congratulations on your POTD!!
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Date: 5/7/2025 3:07:00 AM
Congratulations on your POTD win with your beautifully heartfelt and touching write, SO. Enjoy your day as you celebrate your win.
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Date: 5/7/2025 1:48:00 AM
- Back with congratulations on your p.o.t.d., S.O. :) - hugs
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