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O' Moon

O' moon I know you're out there hidden behind my darkened skies watching over me motionless in a world spinning so out of control amid these temptress cries I beg to thee melt the chill upon this rugged grandeur force me to face the light a path crisscrossed cutting through the thick of night be my gentle guide my friendly guise my window to peer out of help me find the broken pieces of a mixed up yesterday and show to you my willingness and pride O' moon I know you're out there and I know you know I'm still here stuck inside the silence awaiting all alone

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Date: 11/20/2020 9:48:00 PM
"It is the very error of the moon; She comes more nearer earth than she was wont, And makes men mad..."
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Date: 11/20/2020 9:48:00 PM
"Do not swear by the moon, for she changes constantly. Then your love would also change."
Date: 11/20/2020 5:23:00 PM
I also feel the moon watching, this poem makes me want to aid the moon with his loneliness.
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