O Jelly Fish

Dancing in the night
Their tentacles long and sheer……
Beauty in the deep





For the Jellyfish contest~
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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July 10, 2010 at 9:51 AM
this is BEAUTUIFUL. I hope it scores really high. Luv, Andrea ps probably you meant "sheer" for tansparent?
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July 9, 2010 at 2:40 PM
Nice use of imagery to convey your thoughts. Best wishes in the contest. Karen
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