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O Jelly Fish

Dancing in the night Their tentacles long and sheer…… Beauty in the deep For the Jellyfish contest~

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 7/10/2010 9:51:00 AM
this is BEAUTUIFUL. I hope it scores really high. Luv, Andrea ps probably you meant "sheer" for tansparent?
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Date: 7/9/2010 2:40:00 PM
Nice use of imagery to convey your thoughts. Best wishes in the contest. Karen
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Date: 7/8/2010 9:36:00 PM
vey nice mollyt, enjoyed~God bless you~Rick
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