Kim Rodrigues Poet Hybronnet

O Heart

O HEART

Tracing its symmetrical shape —
claustrophobic butterfly wings,
sensate sweep, with kisses my nape.
The flutter of my heartstrings sing.

Don’t break my wings of happiness,
this bellyache ballerina,
this lavender oil of sweetness,
and lover’s splash of katrina.

O pheromone pulse! Rapturous!
A dance in the mirror with you
— my slipper toes adventurous!
Love’s over the rubicon queue.

Lover , you trace my passion’s heart
— if it dies, it will not restart.

2/5/2018<


Early Feb Standard Contest/Brian Strand
Hybronnet Form - 8 syllables per line

*Katrina - pure
**Rubicon - the limiting line

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Darlene De Beaulieu February 7, 2018 at 2:25 PM Kim, I do like this romantic poem. I do like the part when you warn the lover - If it dies ,it will not restart. i like this line. have a nice day my friend. Kim Rodrigues February 7, 2018 at 3:06 PM Thank you, Darlene!

Vijay Pandit February 5, 2018 at 11:35 AM You adorned this poem with precious words Kim. A lovely depiction of delicate feelings stemming from the heart..best for a win. Kim Rodrigues February 5, 2018 at 11:37 AM Thank you, Vijay!

Lunita Blanca February 5, 2018 at 9:56 AM Dear friend, I believe love is just like a heart attack. Kim Rodrigues February 5, 2018 at 9:57 AM For sure!