O Do You Remember Redux

O, do you remember how I once was thin? I’ve been there before, and I’ll be there again. But if I chose a fave, food would probably win; I’m in sort of a deep hole before I begin… Because barbecue’d meats are a man’s true delight, And some smoked mac-n-cheese complements all things, right? And I tend to eschew if the label says, “Lite”, But I neither am one to back down from a fight. I’m not one to diet, but I don’t mean to scoff, so instead I’ve decided to walk my *ss off. Yes, I’m hiking right ‘round the bend, living the dream, eating ripe wild persimmons with sugar and cream.

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Date: 11/25/2022 9:29:00 AM
O dear, Jeff, you might be putting it on faster than you can walk it off. That's my problem!
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Date: 11/25/2022 10:41:00 AM
I have really upped the gain on the hiking since the heart ablation, and have shed about 14 pounds. But the holidays and the delicious desserts do make it hard!
Date: 11/25/2022 3:52:00 AM
lol I love a man who has his own mind and knows the treasures he finds in food, and in walking. A delightful poem that makes me smile, :)
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