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O Christmas Star you’re kinda far. Far kinder still in Bethlehem, but the inn was sold out, and a birthday spent with the lowest rent. Humble I, knees on pavement see you star, so far off, not so near the moon, though my fingers think they know — the world is flat. Two planets fly somewhere way out there “I am here! I am near! Do you see me here?” No acknowledgement for the whole world is looking up but the babe in the manger dreamt of me ‘fore I was born. Think of that! 12/22/2020

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Date: 12/25/2020 12:21:00 PM
He knew us before we knew Him. We rarely think of this. Nice!
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 12/25/2020 7:37:00 PM
Thank you :)
Date: 12/22/2020 11:47:00 AM
Very imaginative, Kim. Loved it. ~~
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 12/22/2020 12:23:00 PM
Thank you, Victor! :)
Date: 12/22/2020 11:38:00 AM
A delightful Christmas poem with a strong touch of creativity, Kim...love the ending!! Wishing you a merry & blessed Christmas. // paul
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 12/22/2020 12:23:00 PM
Merry Christmas and thank you, sweet friend!
Date: 12/22/2020 9:13:00 AM
Lovely words penned today, Blessings Kim
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 12/22/2020 12:23:00 PM
Thank you, sweet lady! Merry Christmas!
Date: 12/22/2020 9:04:00 AM
Life is no accident Kim, we can certainly agree on that, very appropriate for the Christmas season, cheers David
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 12/22/2020 12:22:00 PM
Thank you, David! Merry Christmas!

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