O' Butterfly

O' Butterfly, a child, disgraced Bewitched without a chance Beguiled, exquisitely endowed. Frail wings held no escape Such innocence would glaze her eyes, as gossamer might do He wooed her far astray with words, of promised wedded bliss Travail would kiss the purest heart, and weigh her soul with song ~ The season blossomed, softly charmed of spring and cultured lore But disarmed with hope of tender leaves of which the leaves were tongues His arms had warmed the coldest night, no stars to right the wrongs Tho' moon wore shadows of the sins conceived by western codes Her nature pure, as gentle rain, was as welcome as the sun Expressed in humble, reverent awe,...so eloquently sung A collector dressed in mock disguise…, without a thought or shame forgetful of her fragile ways, he caught her by surprise A uniform of chloroform, a smile that didn't warn A net, he held, along with schemes, a plot to win her hand then trapped her with a smile, a whim, a ruse of false intent With kisses spent, upon her cheek She flew into the bliss, with trust, a web of false retreat.... The deep abyss of love, she fell, her heart upon her sleeve His promises, with no repent, pretense, though, never spent Beneath the spell.....he said farewell, and kept the lies intact. With broken wings she could not fly Her eyes gazed out upon the seas Her voice cried out soliloquies But anguish left her there to die as if to find release Her heart impaled. The sword had won Grief had muted midnight's tongue while east winds echoed with her song… In death her song lives on
________________________________________________________ Inspired by the opera "Madame Butterfly"
Copyright © | Year Posted 2013

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Harding Avatar
August 12, 2015 at 10:26 PM
Man, you have just been kicking A$$ lately, Carrie! I've already commented on this poem but I came to visit it again because I really do love it and I think you should enter it in SKAT's "Butterflies Among Us" contest...
A  Avatar
August 10, 2015 at 6:24 PM
CARRIE, :-) Congratulations on your wonderful win! *SKAT*
Kendrick Avatar
August 10, 2015 at 2:49 PM
Awesome use of metaphors !! No wonder it is in the winners’ list. Congrats..Sara
Inman Avatar
August 10, 2015 at 7:20 AM
Wonderful poem Carrie, beautifully written.
A. Sharma Avatar
August 10, 2015 at 1:24 AM
Congrats on ur awesome winning poem Carrie! Eloquent write!
Harding Avatar
August 9, 2015 at 10:29 PM
Carrie, this is beautiful. So tragic, so doomed. Well deserved win, dear Poet. xoxo
Dietrich Avatar
August 9, 2015 at 5:18 PM
Her love impaled upon the sea. Wow, I love that line. A well deserved win, naturally!! Congrats to you, Carrie.
Cwiak Avatar
August 9, 2015 at 11:32 AM
Just a terrific poem! Kudos on your win!!
Muideen Avatar
August 9, 2015 at 10:23 AM
What a wonderful write and congrats. On your awesome win.......A.M.
A   Avatar
July 27, 2013 at 1:17 PM
wow! wow! spellbound!!!
A   Avatar
July 27, 2013 at 1:07 PM
soup mail....
Anglesey Avatar
June 16, 2013 at 7:38 PM
Beautiful, spellbinding work. Poetic perfection that will go in my faves :)
Puddifoot Avatar
June 10, 2013 at 3:23 PM
this is another example of your great talent, I honestly don't think I've ever read a weak poem of yours; an original take on the 'madame butterfly' story (at least, that's how I read it) - congrats (I would've given it a 1st) :)
A   Avatar
June 10, 2013 at 9:22 AM
Carrie, Congratulations with your nice winning poem... love~ LINDA
D. Avatar
June 9, 2013 at 9:18 PM
thank you' Nate
Sirak Avatar
June 9, 2013 at 2:54 PM
Oh, so beautiful!
Chircop Avatar
June 8, 2013 at 3:37 PM
Unwritten words upon her tongue while the wind of autumn tell her ssong.Sooo very beautiful and going to my favourites.
Andresen Avatar
June 7, 2013 at 10:45 AM
- Beautiful and sweet poem, Carrie! - Good luck in the contest. - Have a relaxed weekend! - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)
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