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O to touch the stars to hold inside this tiny embryo fist one glimmer of Eternity O to remember Who I Am (108 Bhakti Kisses Book Giveaway-paste link to enter) http://www.sairapture.com/108-bhakti-kisses-book-giveaway.html

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Sonya Ki Tomlinson

Date: 6/8/2014 8:53:00 AM

Thank you dear Vicky I am glad you enjoyed the offering. I appreciate the very well thought out review. Have a blessed day.

Vicky Tsiluma

Date: 2/11/2014 2:34:00 AM

Beautiful poem Sonya! I love the nostalgic feel to the poem and your word association. The stars give the notion of eternity and since it is physically impossible to touch them the notion of eternity remains unreachable to human beings yet desirable. Great write!