O

O
to touch the stars
to hold
inside this
tiny
embryo fist
one glimmer of Eternity

O
to remember
Who I Am

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Tomlinson Avatar
June 8, 2014 at 8:53 AM
Thank you dear Vicky I am glad you enjoyed the offering. I appreciate the very well thought out review. Have a blessed day.
Tsiluma Avatar
February 11, 2014 at 2:34 AM
Beautiful poem Sonya! I love the nostalgic feel to the poem and your word association. The stars give the notion of eternity and since it is physically impossible to touch them the notion of eternity remains unreachable to human beings yet desirable. Great write!
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