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Nz Summer

Pohutukawa red bristled rain falling Drifts down sienna cliffs floats on azure waves. children swarm, hear the ice-cream van's song calling sand covered, sticky, happy exploring caves. Flame tree nectar draws chattering Tui play White butterfly sails bob clubward, end of day. Swimmers laughingly frolic while peach sun dips Shore bound its time for coleslaw, buns, beer and chips.

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Gershon Wolf

Date: 8/7/2018 3:44:00 PM

Back with congratulations on your win with this vibrant, happy poem, a metrosiderous marvel, if you will … Best wishes, Gershon

Virginia Waters
Date: 8/7/2018 4:33:00 PM

thank you friend - nice researcherly alliteration methinks!

Susan Gentry

Date: 8/6/2018 7:09:00 PM

Congratulations on your win! :)

Virginia Waters
Date: 8/7/2018 4:33:00 PM

thanks.

Janice Canerdy

Date: 8/6/2018 8:14:00 AM

So descriptive and appealing, Virginia! Janice

Virginia Waters
Date: 8/7/2018 4:33:00 PM

ty Janice.

Gershon Wolf

Date: 8/5/2018 3:15:00 AM

Refreshing rispetto! A joy … to enjoy! Best wishes, Gershon

Virginia Waters
Date: 8/5/2018 4:41:00 PM

ty sir!

Pandita Sietesantos

Date: 8/4/2018 3:00:00 PM

That's my kind of summer! How lovely is this piece bringing back such sweet memories of summer spent enjoying the beauty of nature with family and friends! Great write, Virginia! Hugs. Pandita

Virginia Waters
Date: 8/5/2018 4:40:00 PM

thanks Pandita