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Nuts Or Nuts

When does intelligence transgress into another form? When does intelligence meet insanity? When do words form insanity? One can read and relay, read and relay relay and reconstruct, relay and reconstruct but underneath all these 'r's' is a line A constant. It has no frills, it has no additional edges Its constant, thick, consistent and eternal The simplicity provides space The simplicity allows breath to be heard inhale exhale inhale exhale O2 reaching the core of ones bones the bone marrow Sitting in a pub, a pub filled with eccentric characters The most eccentric of all being those who are classified as intelligent Intelligent or mad? The sophistication of language allows for the words to fall off a cliff into an abyss of miscomprehension within a structural society Roar red perplexions with fast growing ripples ensures revealing of the pressure to maintain a grasp on the libraries within. Cracks start to appear, smiles linger as they no longer understand why their smiling Stares fixated on....nothing....as they question what is real and what is fictional whilst in midst of a conversation. Comical steam appears at the ears in the viewers mind Twins tormented touched, tainted, tortured, troubled and ..transgressed from intelligent through to lunacy. Remove the frills, be specific, fine tune less is more Intelligence is through reduction.

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Date: 6/19/2012 5:49:00 AM
warm welcome to PoetrySoup I offer to you Elise. I wish for you the best in your writing endeavors whatever they may be. May you find inspiration by reading some of the poetry written here by other poets. May the sun shine on you that you might find great joy in your life. Love, Carol 06/19/2012
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