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Nutitious Noodles

Nutritious noodles, curled like worms in a dish, Served with sauce in a salad; stuffed with fish. Veiled with vegetables… making a perfect pasta. Superb, succulent, smooth and rolling in… strata; Hot from the oven, often boiled before it’s baked. With my fork I pick them up, just like worms… raked. Filled with buckwheat, rice and whole wheat flour, Yummy in my tummy, I can take it every hour; Noodles can be nasty, dropping from the spoon… Tasty and tempting, they can make you croon. Are you I search of pasta… that is just perfect? Then noodles are just nice… you can’t neglect!

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Date: 6/22/2011 8:38:00 PM
Wow! this poem takes me to my Indomie noodles.
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Date: 12/28/2010 10:59:00 AM
My son practically lived on noodles when he was at university - he still loves them. I showed him the poem - he said - 'print it off' Well done, Adeleke and thank you for your kind words. Liz
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Date: 11/16/2010 8:34:00 PM
im hungry now nice piece here my friend
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Date: 8/25/2010 3:22:00 PM
Great piece Adeleke. "Spicing" up one's poetry is always nice =) Thank you for sharing your work. Always, Farah
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Date: 8/21/2010 5:58:00 PM
Congrats on the win, Adeleke
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Date: 8/20/2010 12:27:00 PM
congrats on your win in the contest
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Date: 8/20/2010 4:58:00 AM
Congratulations on your win Adeleke in Linda-Marie's contest "Pasta Paradise". Love, Carol
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Date: 8/19/2010 10:13:00 PM
MY brother adored noodles! A yummy poem, Adeleke. Congratulations. LUv, Andrea
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Date: 8/19/2010 6:59:00 PM
I'm reading oodles and oodles of poems about noodles. Congratulations on your win, Adeleke! Love, Carolyn
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Date: 8/19/2010 6:02:00 PM
lThe very best food in the entire world is my mama's homemade egg noodles, cooked in rich chicken broth. Food for the gods. Your poem made me hungry. congratulations. Love, Joyce
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Date: 8/19/2010 5:12:00 PM
Congrats Adeleke on your success in my pasta contest with this yummy entry.. and for always supporting my contests .. with luv.. ciao..
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Date: 8/18/2010 12:59:00 PM
Yummy! Noodles stuffed with fish would taste delicious. Best wishes for success in the pasta contest! Love, Carolyn
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