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Nut Fell On Elephant's Head

a bird was tasting 
                                       nut fell on elephant's head  
                                              it became insane 







For P.D.'s contest
Copyright © | Year Posted 2015

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Dietrich Avatar
July 31, 2015 at 8:24 PM
oh a funny scene, BL. BIG congrats for this one.
Devnath  Avatar
August 9, 2015 at 11:13 AM
Thanks my lovely friend for wishing me congratulation. Sorry for late thanks. Loved always,bl
A  Avatar
July 31, 2015 at 1:27 PM
Wonderful win...SKAT
Devnath  Avatar
July 31, 2015 at 4:55 PM
Thanks my lovely friend for your wonderful comment. Loved always,bl
Carter Avatar
July 31, 2015 at 8:13 AM
Congrats on your fun funny win BL! ~lee
Devnath  Avatar
July 31, 2015 at 11:10 AM
Thanks my lovely friend for your wishes. Loved always,bl
A. Sharma Avatar
July 30, 2015 at 10:37 PM
Wonderful haiku Dev n a superb win! Big congrats!
Devnath  Avatar
July 31, 2015 at 11:09 AM
Thanks my lovely friend for your wishes. Loved always,bl
Andresen Avatar
July 30, 2015 at 2:43 PM
- Congratulations on a great 2nd place in the contest - A wonderful winning poem, dear Bl - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Devnath  Avatar
July 30, 2015 at 4:08 PM
Thanks my lovely lovely friend for your wishes with the beautiful comment. Loved always,bl
A   Avatar
July 30, 2015 at 2:39 PM
Hello My wonderful friend. This reminds me of why I don't like Birds, they seem to drop what ever they want, when ever they want. LOL :), Congratulations! Thank you for supporting my giggle haiku contest. I enjoyed reading every entry placed on the winning list. Stop by my latest blog "MY CAT" if you'd like or have the time. Yours Truly! ~LINDA~
Devnath  Avatar
July 30, 2015 at 4:05 PM
Thanks a lot my *friend for wishing me congratulation. " My cat" is watching by poising and thinking like a great philosopher whether it can find its interest outside , it feels that it's not less than a poet. Poet captures everything and adorns the actual theme with beautiful words with a beautiful pen on paper. It captures its prey with sharp nails and beautifully takes the taste and keeps in its belly. Poet knows that it was siting on the windowsill for hunting but for his curiosity it is silently killed before all. Lol! poet is nice artist that was not known to it. Ha Ha Ha......Loved always, bl
A  Avatar
May 27, 2015 at 9:28 AM
Interesting haiku
Devnath  Avatar
July 31, 2015 at 4:57 PM
Thanks my lovely friend for your comment. Sorry earlier missed to reply. Loved always,bl
Dietrich Avatar
March 14, 2015 at 7:12 PM
oh my, kind of funny. He went NUTS.
Devnath  Avatar
March 15, 2015 at 11:42 AM
Thanks my lovely friend for your funny comment. Loved always,bl
Nunez Avatar
March 13, 2015 at 1:05 PM
i got swapped by the elephant's trunk which hit its head? hence it got crazy....is that it BL? I so enjoyed my little visit today. Each poem is a like a door into your heart and mind... Hugs! :) Kim
Devnath  Avatar
March 13, 2015 at 1:16 PM
For a nut's hit an elephant may smile a bit but we become crazy while knowing that elephant became insane with that hit. Ha ha ha... Thanks my lovely friend for your comment. Loved always,bl
Onclaud Avatar
March 9, 2015 at 12:37 PM
cute one, bl.. i am reminded of cartoons with your fun ku.. huggs
Devnath  Avatar
March 9, 2015 at 10:54 PM
Thanks a lot for your saying it cute with comment my lovely friend. Loved always,bl
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