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POTW & 1st in Time for Dessert Acrostic Contest (Sponsor: Andrea Dietrich)

Judged: 19th April, 2026

Nut Cake

No time to worry over cavities 
Under these circumstances—
Temptation has surfaced 
Caution slips away like weak dentures
Answering desire—
Kindled peanuts 
Ensconced in ginger syrup.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2026

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Miller Avatar
April 21, 2026 at 8:38 AM
Love your voice, great poem, congratulations
Layne Avatar
April 25, 2026 at 12:41 PM
Thanks, Terry!
Dietrich Avatar
April 19, 2026 at 12:50 PM
i loved this so much, so I placed it first, but please in the future, use a space between each word of an acrostic if I do any more such contests. Big congrats
Layne Avatar
April 19, 2026 at 6:55 PM
Noted with thanks, Andrea. Glad you enjoyed it.
Harp Avatar
April 13, 2026 at 11:08 PM
This is so clever, Trina. You've done such a job of tempting me to raid the frig right now, or perhaps the cookie jar. Congratulations for your POTW honors. Moon Harp
Layne Avatar
April 14, 2026 at 6:04 AM
Hi, Moon Harp! Thank you :)
Delegans Avatar
April 13, 2026 at 8:35 PM
Oh you are not messing around when it comes to temptation! Deliciously penned!! Congrats on your POTW, Trina.
Layne Avatar
April 14, 2026 at 6:03 AM
Thank you, Christopher.
Jones Avatar
April 13, 2026 at 2:30 AM
Yummy! That sounds delicious! Big congratulations on your poem of the week honor!
Layne Avatar
April 13, 2026 at 8:17 AM
Thanks. I just wrote about what I've enjoyed. Glad it could bring others some smiles.
Edmonds  Avatar
April 13, 2026 at 1:16 AM
Trina your Nut Cake sounds delicious. Congratulations on having received the honour of poem of the week… Beryl
Layne Avatar
April 13, 2026 at 8:17 AM
Appreciated, Beryl. Cheers from Barbados!
Goldsmith Avatar
April 12, 2026 at 8:01 PM
Congratulations on your POTW win. I enjoyed reading your fun "Nut Cake" write. Let's Eat!!!! Have a blessed day/week with your wonderful win...............
Layne Avatar
April 13, 2026 at 8:20 AM
Glad you enjoyed it, Paula. You shouldn't eat them so often. It's a very sweet treat.
Nicole Avatar
April 12, 2026 at 5:53 PM
' Caution slips away like weak dentures. ' And this makes sense, in a crazy, clever kind of way. : ) Congratulations Trina, on Poem of the Week. Your thoughts bring a smile. : ) Hugs, Brandy
Layne Avatar
April 13, 2026 at 8:20 AM
Thank you, Brandy.
Treacher Avatar
April 12, 2026 at 11:23 AM
Delicious work. Congratulations on POTW
Layne Avatar
April 13, 2026 at 8:21 AM
I appreciate your message. Thank you, Rachel!
Rodgers Avatar
April 12, 2026 at 5:42 AM
Dear Trina, Congrats on POTW. I just love the playful spirit in your words"Weak dentures" slipping away feels like a perfect metaphor for letting go, even if just for a moment. It made me think about the small joys we often deny ourselves, they're the ones that truly brighten a day. We should all give in to a little sweetness, at least every now and again! Blessings, Trina, Daniel
Layne Avatar
April 12, 2026 at 9:59 AM
I appreciate your feedback, Daniel. Thanks for reading it.
Cunningham Avatar
April 12, 2026 at 5:40 AM
Back with congratulations to you Trina on this week's POTW honour. Enjoy your weekend. Tom
Layne Avatar
April 12, 2026 at 9:57 AM
Thanks twice over, Tom!
Etgen-Baker Avatar
April 12, 2026 at 5:24 AM
never heard of nut cake...congrats on your Acrostic being recognized as POTW.
Layne Avatar
April 12, 2026 at 9:56 AM
It's a traditional confection in Barbados. You may find it in some of the other Caribbean islands as well.
Kitchin Avatar
April 12, 2026 at 4:02 AM
Trina, nicely penned. It sounds delicious. Congratulations on POTW.
Layne Avatar
April 12, 2026 at 9:53 AM
Appreciated Tania.
Cunningham Avatar
April 9, 2026 at 5:45 AM
You're making me hungry Trina. I have treats in moderation, trying to keep my weight down. Tom
Layne Avatar
April 12, 2026 at 9:52 AM
Thank you, Tom! If you visit Barbados, you should try one.
Allison Avatar
April 8, 2026 at 12:52 PM
ooh i love the sound of this especially the ginger syrup - yum! hugs jan xx
Layne Avatar
April 8, 2026 at 2:20 PM
Thanks. It's one of my favorites. It's perfectly vegan and absolutely delicious. You really shouldn't have them so often :)
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