Nette Onclaud Poet Quatrain

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An Eve Roper Contest: Nursery Rhymes 7 Written 11 Sept 24

Nursery Time--Fantasy

Soap bubbles float through August
 breeze 
as children sneak in hushed delight, where fables reel 'neath maple trees
to glide away like jewels bright.

Now listen...elves and wizards hop
their peek-a-boos enhancing games
in dreamy land where stars eavesdrop; 
  creating tricks with playful names.

Here, fancy of new summer rings
when kiddies dance, "let bubbles flow", 
while clear froths pop through dusk which 
 sings 
before day ends their treat, aglow!

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Paula Goldsmith September 30, 2024 at 2:23 PM Back with Congratulations on your win. I enjoyed reading your fun Nursery Rhyme write again. The kids will enjoy reading this one. Have a great day with your win..................

Len Gasun September 22, 2024 at 6:56 AM A very delightful and captivating rhyme for all children my dearest poet sis. I'm sure all kids will love and enjoy this as much as adults do (like me). An excellent and precious collection in a rhyme book, too. I enjoyed a lot. Many Thanks. Have a wonderful new week ahead. Hugs

Daniel Henry Rodgers September 12, 2024 at 4:34 AM Dear Nette, I loved how you brought a little more summer back into our lives. I loved all your images, metaphors and sensory aspects. A nice way to say good bye to the memories of Summer. Well Inked! - Blessings, My Dear Friend, Daniel

Gershon Wolf September 11, 2024 at 9:04 PM This poem not only glows, it sparkles and shines, Nette. Wonderful phantasmagoric nursery rhyme. Love it! Smiles, Gershon

Ink Empress September 11, 2024 at 7:03 PM Your way with personifying things in nature is what stands out for me the most dear nette! Loving the imagery and flow of this adorable and magical rhyme! I especially love “ Now listen...elves and wizards hop their peek-a-boos enhancing games in dreamy land where stars eavesdrop; creating tricks with playful names.” just stunning! Everything about this is soul warming! Best wishes! Sending you light always

Paige Hind September 11, 2024 at 10:08 AM Enchanting...could almost hear the laughter of children

Arthur Vaso September 11, 2024 at 12:05 AM Very cute loved this!

Silent One September 10, 2024 at 12:20 PM A lovely nursery rhyme that flows so well..

Kim Rodrigues September 10, 2024 at 9:56 AM I can picture your fairy tale! Very nice, Nette!

Paula Goldsmith September 10, 2024 at 9:46 AM I enjoyed reading your fun Nursery Rhyme write. "Good Luck" We both did this one. Have a fun day writing away...............