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Numbered Scent (Ohduhkellee)

A mothers gift , Generally at Christmas . Easiest option which I hope she will like . ( Eau De Kelly) Fragrance for older ladies , who do remember ... I have just "invented "this new form of poetry . As you can see it is the 4~7~11 . First line has 4 syllables , next 7 and the last has 11 . And , if you think it stinks......... yes it probably does...... All rights are reserved ( and a few lefts).

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Andrea Dietrich

Date: 7/23/2010 12:35:00 PM

I had not heard of that fragrance. Glad to not be that old. haha. Did your invention here every catch on, Sean? I invented 7/5 Trochee if you ever want to check it out. Oh, I think you saw it. It's the form I used for my devil poem! it's 7/5/7/5 with the 5's rhyming. I need to try to advertise it more. Actually I even saw already someone had used it somewhere when I googled it once!