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Number Is Consistant

Number Is Consistent Number reading poems is consistent They feel close to them and not distant Way read was thorough Minds into poems did burrow Hope you understand what they meant. James Horn http://www.poetrysoup.com/poets/top_100_poets_most_poems_all_time.aspx

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Jerome Malenfant

Date: 11/8/2016 11:25:00 AM

Ditto '???'. What does the last line mean? Also, 'there' -> 'their'

James Horn
Date: 11/8/2016 2:50:00 PM

JM, I really appreciate all of the criticism. This is the only way I can improve. I am writing five poems a day hoping one of them is well liked. Let me go and read some of your poems. Soup keeps kicking me off. Jim Horn

Keith Logan

Date: 11/8/2016 9:57:00 AM

???

James Horn
Date: 11/8/2016 10:27:00 AM

KL, You are absolutely right so I re-wrote poem. Check out the changes. Jim Horn

Keith Logan
Date: 11/8/2016 9:59:00 AM

Check the grammar, it is dire.