Number Is Consistant

Number Is Consistent

Number reading poems is consistent
They feel close to them and not distant
Way read was thorough
Minds into poems did burrow
Hope you understand what they meant.

James Horn

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Copyright © | Year Posted 2016

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Malenfant Avatar
November 8, 2016 at 11:25 AM
Ditto '???'. What does the last line mean? Also, 'there' -> 'their'
Horn Avatar
November 8, 2016 at 2:50 PM
JM, I really appreciate all of the criticism. This is the only way I can improve. I am writing five poems a day hoping one of them is well liked. Let me go and read some of your poems. Soup keeps kicking me off. Jim Horn
Logan Avatar
November 8, 2016 at 9:57 AM
???
Horn Avatar
November 8, 2016 at 10:27 AM
KL, You are absolutely right so I re-wrote poem. Check out the changes. Jim Horn
Logan Avatar
November 8, 2016 at 9:59 AM
Check the grammar, it is dire.
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