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Number Four: Wars and Battles

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The outskirts of ruin, children of war, Pass by upheavals, turmoils, turbulence, Impacted scenes that tore, they must endure, Safe from acts of war that was merciless, Behind smiles and charms, home, away from war, Now comes the battles, that adds to their scar. 2019 September 27 howmanysyllables 6 lines x 10 syllables = a perfect 60 syllables ababcc

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Date: 9/28/2019 1:59:00 AM
Providence keeps us in and out of wars perpetually, and this write shows us that.
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Hilo Poet
Date: 9/28/2019 5:24:00 AM
Amen to that!
Date: 9/27/2019 10:00:00 PM
This is thought provoking and something to think about for sure. Thank you for writing such a intelligent poem. Bless you
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Hilo Poet
Date: 9/27/2019 10:10:00 PM
Blessing of Grace is yours! ~ Aloha always William

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