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Numb Heart Feeling

Delusions create a barrier Opaquing logic reasoning Trembling rapidly the heart With erroneous thoughts Falling fast in love Reality Wakes up you From false World For Form N-Ninet or Nonet Poetry Contest Sponsored by Broken Wings Fifth Place 4-22-2017

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Date: 5/7/2017 4:40:00 PM
NIcely done, Nayda. Congratulations for your win. I too liked the word numb!
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Nayda Ivette Negron Flores
Date: 5/7/2017 7:27:00 PM
Thank you Andrea.
Date: 5/5/2017 3:20:00 PM
Nayda congratulations on your win in my contest with this wonderful Nonet
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Nayda Ivette Negron Flores
Date: 5/5/2017 3:47:00 PM
Thank you Constance.
Date: 4/23/2017 3:21:00 PM
Hi Nayda , great write, falling fast in love , not the greatest of ideas :))) Hugs from Ireland
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Nayda Ivette Negron Flores
Date: 4/23/2017 5:00:00 PM
Thank you Niall.
Date: 4/23/2017 12:38:00 AM
Splendid you have captured the feeling very well Nayda.
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Nayda Ivette Negron Flores
Date: 4/23/2017 8:00:00 AM
Thank you Miraj.

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