Nayda Ivette Negron Flores Poet Nonet

Numb Heart Feeling

Delusions create a barrier
Opaquing logic reasoning
Trembling rapidly the heart
With erroneous thoughts
Falling fast in love
Reality
Wakes up you
From false
World







For Form N-Ninet or Nonet Poetry Contest
Sponsored by  Broken Wings
Fifth Place
4-22-2017

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Andrea Dietrich May 7, 2017 at 4:40 PM NIcely done, Nayda. Congratulations for your win. I too liked the word numb! Nayda Ivette Negron Flores May 7, 2017 at 7:27 PM Thank you Andrea.

Constance La France May 5, 2017 at 3:20 PM Nayda congratulations on your win in my contest with this wonderful Nonet Nayda Ivette Negron Flores May 5, 2017 at 3:47 PM Thank you Constance.

Miraj Raha April 23, 2017 at 12:38 AM Splendid you have captured the feeling very well Nayda. Nayda Ivette Negron Flores April 23, 2017 at 8:00 AM Thank you Miraj.