Numb

Running away from everything I know
Fearing all I ever knew
Black acid tears burn scars on my face
I should've never let you get close to me
Never let you get to know me
I'm a little too dangerous
A little too smart
Too fast
Too strong
Too dangerous
Faster and faster through the forest 
The blood splashed trees give up their dead
The spirits are my guardians now
You don't need to worry
Approaching the cliff, I see it's manipulative smile
The ground turns to ice under my feet as I slip and fall
The jagged earth digs into my flesh
Soaking it's surface with crimson gore
My eyes burn black as I fall off the edge
My acid tears dig deeper as my mangled corpse falls off the edge
A cascade of blood as my background
The water below is white, pure
But i'm not
The cascade hits before I do, injecting it's deathly toxen
It shouldn't be possible that I'm still alive
Drowning in poison
Bleeding eternally
Acid for tears
I see you at the edge of the cliff
A single tear falls from your face
Comfort felt, only briefly
As your tear turns to fire
And engulfes me
And all I am
Is numb

Copyright © | Year Posted 2008



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Date: 8/14/2010 2:19:00 AM
Jenni you are awesome! even though it sounds depressing its the way i feel 90 percent of the time.
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Date: 9/10/2009 11:26:00 AM
Thanks :)
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Date: 7/28/2009 12:16:00 PM
Excellent write Jenni>>James
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Date: 5/18/2009 7:05:00 AM
Thank you all so much. What place did I get in the contest?
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Date: 5/14/2009 12:57:00 PM
Dear Jenni,Congratulations on YOUR Well Deserved Honorable Mention in Deborah's Wicked Contest ALWAYS...HG
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Date: 5/14/2009 10:40:00 AM
Congratulatins on placing in Deborah's poem. W-I-C-K-E-D Eeew! So devilish. Love, Dane
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Date: 5/14/2009 7:07:00 AM
I won? R u serious?!
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Date: 5/14/2009 6:34:00 AM
Great writing, chilling. Congratulations on your HM! Smiles from Lolita
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Date: 5/13/2009 6:56:00 PM
Jenni, congrats with your HM...Raul
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Date: 5/13/2009 4:27:00 PM
Congratulations on your win in Debbie's contest! Well done! Love, Shar
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Date: 4/22/2009 10:34:00 AM
Figure of speech 's all
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Date: 4/21/2009 12:12:00 PM
Good entry for Something Wicked This Way Comes contest..I have one question "My acid tears dig deeper as my mangled corpse falls off the edge" if you're a corpse how are you crying? LIGHT & Love!
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Date: 2/13/2009 12:40:00 PM
Jenni, that numbness will go away as your life moves forward. Speaking on behalf of many poets, we've been there and we've survived. I pray the darkness has lifted and you have found joy again. Carolyn
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Date: 12/15/2008 3:03:00 PM
Thx
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Date: 12/13/2008 3:42:00 PM
Very deep... *Breana*
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