Numb

Floor to ceiling, wall to wall, world to world, Bouncing from dimension to dimension, Stranded in the space that is nowhere, Unsure if this is wake or sleep, Unsure which option is reality, Rapid fire stillness, The love child of sanity and insanity.

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Hilo Poet

Date: 5/15/2019 8:24:00 PM

Ah! I've posted to the 'Friend Builder' site, apparently, the 3 or more of my comments to yours and others, got jumbled in its delivery, being new to 'soup', I'm challenged as to where one goes on this type of occurrence?

Hilo Poet

Date: 5/15/2019 8:19:00 PM

Sorry, there seemingly, a glitch, obviously revealing down below, as I'd not read this until I received your reply--title unbeknownst to me, tho' I've read others, nonetheless, READ and very insightful for it does render your title justifiably William, Sorry for the misunderstanding, Aloha wk

Hilo Poet

Date: 5/15/2019 7:20:00 PM

A desire in every heart placed in well placed words Richard, Aloha wk

Hilo Poet

Date: 5/14/2019 10:07:00 PM

It was very touching indeed Lyra, Aloha wk

Djeli Forchion
Date: 5/14/2019 10:49:00 PM

Thank you for taking the time to read this string of words. wf