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Floor to ceiling, wall to wall, world to world,
Bouncing from dimension to dimension,
Stranded in the space that is nowhere,
Unsure if this is wake or sleep,
Unsure which option is reality,
Rapid fire stillness,
The love child of sanity and insanity.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2019

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Kelii Kekaula Avatar
May 15, 2019 at 8:24 PM
Ah! I've posted to the 'Friend Builder' site, apparently, the 3 or more of my comments to yours and others, got jumbled in its delivery, being new to 'soup', I'm challenged as to where one goes on this type of occurrence?
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May 15, 2019 at 8:19 PM
Sorry, there seemingly, a glitch, obviously revealing down below, as I'd not read this until I received your reply--title unbeknownst to me, tho' I've read others, nonetheless, READ and very insightful for it does render your title justifiably William, Sorry for the misunderstanding, Aloha wk
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May 15, 2019 at 7:20 PM
A desire in every heart placed in well placed words Richard, Aloha wk
Kelii Kekaula Avatar
May 14, 2019 at 10:07 PM
It was very touching indeed Lyra, Aloha wk
Forchion Avatar
May 14, 2019 at 10:49 PM
Thank you for taking the time to read this string of words. wf
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