Nette Onclaud Poet Rhyme

Np--Noise of Pain

NP- NOISE OF PAIN


curse and scream from your lungs
slap me with words like I am a rag
throw the venom while kids hear the pangs
kicking my heart  sucked  in torn paper bag

this is the noise of  agony stabbed
I’m no longer a victim under your spell
that sweet voice I had once loved
drives me to  walk out from your sharp shell


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Susan Burch's Contest: Offensive Odors/ Noise Polllution

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Joyce Johnson January 5, 2012 at 5:52 PM Congratulations on your win. Love, Joyce

Carol Sunshine Brown January 5, 2012 at 6:43 AM Congratulations on your win in ~Susan's~ "Offensive Odors or Noise Pollution" contest Nette. Love, Carol

Kash Poet January 4, 2012 at 2:44 AM Nette congratulations on your win.Loved it first time around,

Andrea Dietrich January 2, 2012 at 8:13 PM good, nette. walk out from it!! I think you are the only one who discussed this kind of noise, the worst kind of all! Hope you did well in the contest. Luv, Andrea

Kash Poet December 31, 2011 at 10:28 PM Nette,wish you a very very Happy New Year....kashi

Kash Poet December 30, 2011 at 3:26 AM The agony of your mind expressed very effectively and emotionally here.This is sure worse than the noise pollution caused by high decibel sounds as it hurts one mind.

Russell Sivey December 29, 2011 at 7:57 PM Wow, amazing write Nette! It's true how much pain you can get from noise, from objects and from hate in the form of words! Wonderfully written! Awesome Work!!

M.I.A . December 29, 2011 at 7:48 PM WoW! you got the emotion boiling here Nette... quite disturbing in a good way. Wishing you a Great Happy New Year dear poet.