Nox

Jubilant darkness Obscure to the eyes ,delight for some Defining change and difference A time of rest and sleep Evening falls

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Gregory Golden

Date: 8/6/2008 10:34:00 AM

Powerful use of imagery, here. The first read hypnotized me. Words are the magic elixir of the soul. keep telling the truth

Heidie Buys

Date: 7/29/2008 5:47:00 PM

A gentle and introspective poem. I really enjoyed this one. Well done. Regards Heidie

Sharon Winter

Date: 7/29/2008 10:41:00 AM

This sounds so peaceful. I had such insomnia last night. Should have read your poem! Love, Shar

Michael Jordan

Date: 7/28/2008 11:22:00 AM

Hi Laura - I enjoyed your poem - I used to hate sleep but now it comes much easer - Blessings

Michael Degenhardt

Date: 7/28/2008 11:05:00 AM

The read is comforting and pleasing as the flow is gentle and your words are wonderfully descriptive. Excellent write. Michael

P Sheart

Date: 7/28/2008 10:46:00 AM

Hi Laura This gets me to feeling all dreamy ha!A lovely write with the poetential to get one thinking about what heartfelt change really means within or dreams and prayers as we lay our heads upon our pillow. I love the line jubilant darkness... Just beautiful. Love Light Truth Patricia

James Foulk

Date: 7/28/2008 10:39:00 AM

a very peaceful piece of poetry, enjoyed reading this one