Now--Smile and Wave

With precious children you’ve been blessed.
You’ve guided them with loving care.
While helping them become their best,
your standards have been high, but fair.
You’ve breathed their names in every prayer.

Your eighteen-year-old, college-bound,
is packed; a distant dorm room waits.
She says she’s ready, but you’ve found
you’re NOT. Emotion permeates
your being; your resolve, abates.

Now like a fledgling on the wing,
she’ll take her flight and find her way.
Embrace once more. Release; don’t cling!
Your love and pride in her convey.
Then—you must let her walk away!


November 23, 2021
entered in the "W" New Poem Poetry Contest      placed 3rd
Sponsor: Constance LaFrance
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La France Avatar
November 29, 2021 at 2:11 PM
Janice, wonderful, congratulations on your Third Place in my "W" New Poems Contest ~ love and serenity _Constance
Canerdy Avatar
December 2, 2021 at 5:49 PM
THANK YOU, Constance! Janice
Seeker Avatar
November 25, 2021 at 8:50 PM
Superb message, beautifully penned! Congrats on your win, Janice
Canerdy Avatar
November 27, 2021 at 9:51 AM
Thanks so much, Unseeking Seeker. Janice
Pandit Avatar
November 23, 2021 at 6:10 AM
Much joy to see them grow--still it hurts when letting go. A wave of joy is your poem, Janice.
Canerdy Avatar
November 23, 2021 at 8:41 PM
Thank you for this wonderful comment, Vijay! Janice
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