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Nowhere In Sight

On a grassy verge above the surging rill she stood fair haired and proud, three leaf clover substrate at her toes. Clutching saline bouquets I had plucked from my neighbours walk-in green house. Woman of resplendent peerage cast a pearlescent glance among the swirl-frond waves that prey on fractured fjords. At a distance, in her mind. But not for long before we fled like butterfly escapees over marshes, mounds and meads. Shriek from sun-dried swallow as we stumble awkwardly upon their woodbine nest. Noonday train fire iron to the fossil fuel bled caterpillar plain, rural muzak for a pinpoint tip toe dash through barren fodder, spiny thistle scald on insect bitten arch, splashes are a symbol on our craft stitch needle knitwear. Yet I struggled to keep pace on raw earth sand stone, crab apple briar tangles by the dozen hung like plastic refuse obstacle, but nothing now could halt this headlong sprint to who knows where. Date written; 23rd Of December 2020 Date posted to contest ; First Of October 2022 Contest name ; 2022 Poetry Marathon Mile 15 Sponsor ; Mark Toney A 26 line poem

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Date: 8/3/2022 12:39:00 AM
Intricacies of your word choices entwined with marvelous imagery make this prose poem uniquely stand out. A worthy winner Howard. Congratulations! Blessings xxoo
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Date: 8/2/2022 2:30:00 PM
Hi Howard. I really like your imagery and 'fragmented' story style. I have to hold my hand up and say that you had me reaching for the dictionary on a few occasions. :) Prose poetry is not something I'm familiar with but your piece has triggered an interest for me and I feel it's certainly worth exploring more. Congratulations on your win in Mystic Rose Rose's contest. Cheers - Gary
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Date: 8/2/2022 1:38:00 PM
Congratulations on your win. A "Wonderful" write. Have a great/blessed day................
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Date: 3/27/2021 5:09:00 PM
Howard, congratulations on your win in my challenge, A Meaning Poem, and that is exactly what you gave me, well done _Constance
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Date: 12/24/2020 1:14:00 PM
Howard, a dreamy wonderful write, Merry Christmas _Constance
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