Nowhere In Sight

On a grassy verge above the surging rill 
she stood fair haired and proud,
three leaf clover substrate at her toes.
Clutching saline bouquets I had plucked 
from my neighbours walk-in green house.
Woman of resplendent peerage cast a 
pearlescent glance among the swirl-frond 
waves that prey on fractured fjords.
At a distance, in her mind.
But not for long before we fled like butterfly
 escapees over marshes, mounds and meads.
Shriek from sun-dried swallow as we stumble
 awkwardly upon their woodbine nest.
Noonday train fire iron to the fossil
 fuel bled caterpillar plain,
rural muzak for a pinpoint tip toe dash
 through barren fodder,
spiny thistle scald on insect bitten arch,
splashes are a symbol on our craft
 stitch needle knitwear.
Yet I struggled to keep pace on 
raw earth sand stone,
crab apple briar tangles by the dozen 
hung like plastic refuse obstacle,
but nothing now could halt this headlong 
sprint to who knows where.


Date written; 23rd Of December 2020

Date posted to contest ; First Of October 2022

Contest name ; 2022 Poetry Marathon Mile 15

        Sponsor ;  Mark Toney

A 26 line poem
Copyright © | Year Posted 2020

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Dietrich Avatar
November 26, 2025 at 9:05 PM
A very belated congrats for whatever contest you got a win with . Such striking imagery
Marcum Wong Avatar
August 3, 2022 at 12:39 AM
Intricacies of your word choices entwined with marvelous imagery make this prose poem uniquely stand out. A worthy winner Howard. Congratulations! Blessings xxoo
Radice Avatar
August 2, 2022 at 2:30 PM
Hi Howard. I really like your imagery and 'fragmented' story style. I have to hold my hand up and say that you had me reaching for the dictionary on a few occasions. :) Prose poetry is not something I'm familiar with but your piece has triggered an interest for me and I feel it's certainly worth exploring more. Congratulations on your win in Mystic Rose Rose's contest. Cheers - Gary
Goldsmith Avatar
August 2, 2022 at 1:38 PM
Congratulations on your win. A "Wonderful" write. Have a great/blessed day................
La France Avatar
March 27, 2021 at 5:09 PM
Howard, congratulations on your win in my challenge, A Meaning Poem, and that is exactly what you gave me, well done _Constance
La France Avatar
December 24, 2020 at 1:14 PM
Howard, a dreamy wonderful write, Merry Christmas _Constance
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