Nowhere

I'm going nowhere 
And you're coming with me 
What always was will never be 
But what is now we can't ignore 
And someday soon will be nevermore 
When we were we weren't really 
Present only surrealy 
I'm going nowhere 
And you're coming with me 
Best accept it you can't escape 
Your final destiny and certain fate 
In the end there is no more 
And you and I will be for sure 
Nowhere never evermore 
But nowhere isn't really there 
So when we get there we won't really care

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015



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Date: 10/30/2015 8:32:00 PM
I'm going nowhere And you're coming with me Best accept it you can't escape Your final destiny and certain fate In the end there is no more And you and I will be for sure Nowhere never evermore But nowhere isn't really there So when we get there we won't really care ^ that is an awesome poem. the other stuff is so paradoxical it gave me a tiny headache and I had to keep returning to the poem after getting annoyed :)
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Howard Tunick
Date: 10/31/2015 7:07:00 PM
Thank you for (hopefully) enjoying the poem. Apologies for the annoyance. Really thank you for reminding me of the word paradox. I love paradox. The Universe seems full of them. Great fun looking for them and playing with the poetry. I seem to have lost track of the word until you reminded me. Really, thank you! H
Date: 10/30/2015 11:43:00 AM
I'm coming with you too
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Howard Tunick
Date: 10/31/2015 7:12:00 PM
Welcome aboard Abdiel. Crazy journey to a wonderful no place.
Date: 7/10/2015 10:31:00 PM
A clever, inventive and pleasant to read write that deeply conveys a message that should resonate in every human...bare bones truth that most will reject or will puzzle over.......good work.
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Howard Tunick
Date: 7/11/2015 5:13:00 PM
Leo, Thank you for the kind words. I am thrilled that someone got it. I can understand the puzzlement. I do believe the rejection may be fear.
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