Now That's a Golf Shot

White spherical supersonic take-off Whoosh! Eclipsing jet-like speeds ~ Spectators scattering

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Michelle Faulkner

Date: 7/30/2019 1:08:00 PM

Great visual, made me laugh!

Gershon Wolf
Date: 7/30/2019 1:16:00 PM

Fore!!!! (Maybe I should have called this Fore-play, but I just couldn't). LOL. Thanks for the feedback, Michelle. Glad it tickled your funny-bone. :) gw

Ilene Bauer

Date: 7/29/2019 4:47:00 PM

ha! love it!

Gershon Wolf
Date: 7/29/2019 5:57:00 PM

Ha! You mean there are actually golf courses in the concrete jungle?! LOL. :) gw

Heidi Sands

Date: 7/29/2019 3:07:00 PM

LOL Great one, fun and funny Gershon :)

Gershon Wolf
Date: 7/29/2019 5:55:00 PM

Glad you saw the humor in this golf shot, Heidi. It is a bit of hyperbole --- a large bit, perhaps. :) gw