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Now My Wings Can Soar In the Sky

My darling you look tired and frail- as your life left, I had to wail. I long to meet again- sweet guy; Now my wings can soar in the sky. Without you my life is so bleak, being with you is what I seek; oh how I miss your touch- I die. Now my wings can soar in the sky. My darling you left me so soon? we had planned our next honeymoon; my simple wish- I wouldn't say bye Now my wings can soar in the sky. As I lay to eternal sleep ……. my hurt heart shall no longer weep my loving man- you were so spry Now my wings can soar in the sky. 7- 12-19 Contest:Writing Challenge 1, July 2019 - Repeating Refrain Contest Sponsor: Dear Heart

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Joseph May

Date: 7/19/2019 2:37:00 PM

Very nicely penned...Congrats on your win Alexis

Constance La France

Date: 7/19/2019 9:38:00 AM

Alexis, congratulations on your win in my Writing Challenge with this emotional and wonderfully penned write, it truly touched my heart ~

Alexis Y.
Date: 7/19/2019 10:07:00 AM

Hi BW, You always host good contest. I appreciate my placement and I am moved by your comment. Have a great day my friend:-) Alexis

Caren Krutsinger

Date: 7/17/2019 6:54:00 AM

Beautiful poem. Adore your refrain. Congratulations on a well-deserved win!

Brenda Chiri

Date: 7/16/2019 8:27:00 PM

Alexis congrats on your win!;)

Lady Labyrinth

Date: 7/15/2019 10:06:00 AM

The urge to want to be with the one you love is strong when they move forward into the next life, but they never really leave us, they are always close by, particularly when you need them most Alexis. And I do believe, reading your first poem, they visit us in our dreams. Your dreamer will visit you at some point, if not already. I am so sorry for your loss. Much love, Leanne x

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 7/14/2019 10:44:00 AM

Going into the next world soaring, that is the dream, Alexis. To be with your love! WEll captured.

Richard Lamoureux

Date: 7/14/2019 8:37:00 AM

You make sadness feel transcendent.

Ann Gilmour

Date: 7/13/2019 3:37:00 PM

Love is so much stronger and that bond can never be broken Alexis. A beautiful write that moved my soul thank you. With kindest thoughts Ann xx

Demetrios Trifiatis

Date: 7/13/2019 10:51:00 AM

Love always help us soar in the sky! Such a romantic poem! Good luck dearest, Alexis! xxx

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 7/13/2019 6:25:00 AM

Nicely done, where the yearning for a lost love finds in the end heaven’s wings!

Alexis Y.
Date: 7/13/2019 10:30:00 AM

Hi Kim, Thank you so much. I appreciate that you stopped by. Have a great day:-) Alexis