Alexis Y. Poet Rhyme

Now My Wings Can Soar In the Sky

My darling you look tired and frail-
as your life left, I had to wail.
   I long to meet again- sweet guy;
Now my wings can soar in the sky.

Without you my life is so bleak,
 being with you is what I seek;
     oh how I miss your touch-  I die.
 Now my wings can soar in the sky.

My darling you left me so soon?
we had planned our next honeymoon;
    my simple wish- I wouldn't say bye
Now my wings can soar in the sky.

 As I lay to eternal sleep …….
my hurt heart shall no longer weep 
     my loving man- you were so spry
Now my wings can soar in the sky.





7- 12-19

Contest:Writing Challenge 1, July 2019 - Repeating Refrain Contest
Sponsor: Dear Heart

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Joseph May July 19, 2019 at 2:37 PM Very nicely penned...Congrats on your win Alexis

Constance La France July 19, 2019 at 9:38 AM Alexis, congratulations on your win in my Writing Challenge with this emotional and wonderfully penned write, it truly touched my heart ~ Alexis Y. July 19, 2019 at 10:07 AM Hi BW, You always host good contest. I appreciate my placement and I am moved by your comment. Have a great day my friend:-) Alexis

Caren Krutsinger July 17, 2019 at 6:54 AM Beautiful poem. Adore your refrain. Congratulations on a well-deserved win!

Brenda Chiri July 16, 2019 at 8:27 PM Alexis congrats on your win!;)

Lady Labyrinth July 15, 2019 at 10:06 AM The urge to want to be with the one you love is strong when they move forward into the next life, but they never really leave us, they are always close by, particularly when you need them most Alexis. And I do believe, reading your first poem, they visit us in our dreams. Your dreamer will visit you at some point, if not already. I am so sorry for your loss. Much love, Leanne x

Andrea Dietrich July 14, 2019 at 10:44 AM Going into the next world soaring, that is the dream, Alexis. To be with your love! WEll captured.

Richard Lamoureux July 14, 2019 at 8:37 AM You make sadness feel transcendent.

Ann Gilmour July 13, 2019 at 3:37 PM Love is so much stronger and that bond can never be broken Alexis. A beautiful write that moved my soul thank you. With kindest thoughts Ann xx

Demetrios Trifiatis July 13, 2019 at 10:51 AM Love always help us soar in the sky! Such a romantic poem! Good luck dearest, Alexis! xxx

Kim Rodrigues July 13, 2019 at 6:25 AM Nicely done, where the yearning for a lost love finds in the end heaven’s wings! Alexis Y. July 13, 2019 at 10:30 AM Hi Kim, Thank you so much. I appreciate that you stopped by. Have a great day:-) Alexis