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Now, its all over

Now, it's all over.... Don't look so sad my love, now its all over I never thought that my love will end with grief When you walked away from me for good my heart cried for your lost love Now, where do I carry my feelings at last The day I was with you for your love that can not be found any more in my heart The day I was with you for our honeymoon those feelings cannot be found in my present life Don't come back to me my love, now its all over Stay wherever you get better love showered upon you I have given you what ever I could I have walked with you the distance that I could I have shown you my love as much as I could but now I am alone and left nothing for me Don't think of me my love, now its all over I will walk to the land that no one knows and be there without hearing your loving words any more. Ravi Sathasivam / Sri Lanka All rights are reserved @ 2018 - Ravi Sathasivam

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Date: 10/1/2018 8:12:00 PM
Heartbreak can be so devastating. You have expressed your loss so well in this poignant poem Ravi! : )
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Date: 8/12/2018 11:43:00 PM
Though lovers are lost, love shall not. Sad sad poem...
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Ravi Sathasivam
Date: 9/13/2018 1:13:00 AM
Thank you very much for your comment on my poem Appreciated very much my dear friend.
Date: 8/11/2018 5:01:00 AM
A sad farewell love poem expressing in a fine poetic lyrical way without grudges. Thumbs up poet. Pleez do write your thoughts/comment under my newest poem too.
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Ravi Sathasivam
Date: 9/13/2018 1:13:00 AM
Thank you very much for your comment on my poem Appreciated very much my dear friend.
Date: 8/11/2018 3:59:00 AM
Wow you certainly bring your heartfelt poetry to the fore here, Ravi, So sad, yet beautiful poetry..
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Ravi Sathasivam
Date: 9/13/2018 1:13:00 AM
Thank you very much for your comment on my poem Appreciated very much my dear friend.
Date: 8/10/2018 5:35:00 PM
Oh, it's so sad, Ravi. But sad poems make for very poetic verse!
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Ravi Sathasivam
Date: 9/13/2018 1:13:00 AM
Thank you very much for your comment on my poem Appreciated very much my dear friend.
Date: 8/10/2018 10:03:00 AM
Ahh!! Sad one. Thanks for stopping by. Sara
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Ravi Sathasivam
Date: 9/13/2018 1:14:00 AM
Thank you very much for your comment on my poem Appreciated very much my dear friend.
Date: 8/10/2018 8:37:00 AM
So very sad, Ravi, broken heart is a heavy feeling to feel.. It's like out in the ocean reaching for a life line that isn't there.. Good write my friend and thank you so much for your visits.. The older I get the memory seems to leave me; so if I don't visit right away for give me.. I do enjoy your writings. hugs dear friend.
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Ravi Sathasivam
Date: 9/13/2018 1:14:00 AM
Thank you very much for your comment on my poem Appreciated very much my dear friend.
Date: 8/10/2018 5:27:00 AM
This is very sad, Ravi. Putting on a brave face will never manage to diminish the pain of lost love. You are able to involve the reader in your emotional thoughts. Regards // paul
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Ravi Sathasivam
Date: 9/13/2018 1:14:00 AM
Thank you very much for your comment on my poem Appreciated very much my dear friend.
Date: 8/10/2018 3:54:00 AM
How sad when love departs and its all over. The memories then become all over to, I have enjoyed your poem this morning, have a great day Ravi.
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Ravi Sathasivam
Date: 9/13/2018 1:14:00 AM
Thank you very much for your comment on my poem Appreciated very much my dear friend.
Date: 8/9/2018 2:11:00 PM
- My heart is crying for your lost love, Ravi - A heartbreaking poem, beautifully written - Best wishes and hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Ravi Sathasivam
Date: 9/13/2018 1:14:00 AM
Thank you very much for your comment on my poem Appreciated very much my dear friend. Hugsxxx
Date: 8/9/2018 12:34:00 PM
Gracious voice of poetry and a gracious reaction! A joy to read your beautiful write! Thank you so much for sharing. Be blessed.
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Ravi Sathasivam
Date: 9/13/2018 1:15:00 AM
Thank you very much for your comment on my poem Appreciated very much my dear friend.
Date: 8/9/2018 11:36:00 AM
It is always sad when love leaves the heart! What a heartbreaking piece this is so reflective of the end of a love affair! Well done, my friend! Hugs. Pandita
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Ravi Sathasivam
Date: 9/13/2018 1:15:00 AM
Thank you very much for your comment on my poem Appreciated very much my dear friend.
Date: 8/9/2018 10:49:00 AM
A sad story of separation Ravi..Best wishes
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Ravi Sathasivam
Date: 9/13/2018 1:15:00 AM
Thank you very much for your comment on my poem Appreciated very much my dear friend.
Date: 8/9/2018 10:37:00 AM
So sad Ravi, Peace be with you...
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Ravi Sathasivam
Date: 9/13/2018 1:15:00 AM
Thank you very much for your comment on my poem Appreciated very much my dear friend.
Date: 8/9/2018 9:04:00 AM
The echo of a lost love reverberates in the heart still causing grief and regrets ! A wonderful write dear friend, Ravi!
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Ravi Sathasivam
Date: 9/13/2018 1:15:00 AM
Thank you very much for your comment on my poem Appreciated very much my dear friend.
Date: 8/9/2018 8:00:00 AM
You depicted lost love so well with urgent emotions Ravi..it feels so real. I sincerely hope this is fiction. Well done, Ravi.
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Ravi Sathasivam
Date: 9/13/2018 1:15:00 AM
Thank you very much for your comment on my poem Appreciated very much my dear friend.
Date: 8/9/2018 7:34:00 AM
This is sad but poeticly expressed. I hope it is not your experience.
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Date: 9/13/2018 1:16:00 AM
Thank you very much for your comment on my poem Appreciated very much my dear friend.