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Now, Its All Over

Now, it's all over....

Don't look so sad my love, now its all over
I never thought that my love will end with grief
When you walked away from me for good
my heart cried for your lost love
Now, where do I carry my feelings at last
The day I was with you for your love
that can not be found any more in my heart
The day I was with you for our honeymoon
those feelings cannot be found in my present life
Don't come back to me my love, now its all over
Stay wherever you get better love showered upon you
I have given you what ever I could
I have walked with you the distance that I could
I have shown you my love as much as I could
but now I am alone and left nothing for me
Don't think of me my love, now its all over
I will walk to the land that no one knows
and be there without hearing your loving words any more.

Ravi Sathasivam / Sri Lanka
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Connie Marcum Wong Date: 10/1/2018 8:12:00 PM Heartbreak can be so devastating. You have expressed your loss so well in this poignant poem Ravi! : ) Login to Reply

Pashang Salehi Date: 8/12/2018 11:43:00 PM Though lovers are lost, love shall not. Sad sad poem... Login to Reply Ravi Sathasivam Date: 9/13/2018 1:13:00 AM Thank you very much for your comment on my poem Appreciated very much my dear friend.

S.Zaynab Kamoonpuri Date: 8/11/2018 5:01:00 AM A sad farewell love poem expressing in a fine poetic lyrical way without grudges. Thumbs up poet. Pleez do write your thoughts/comment under my newest poem too. Login to Reply Ravi Sathasivam Date: 9/13/2018 1:13:00 AM Thank you very much for your comment on my poem Appreciated very much my dear friend.

Harry Horsman Date: 8/11/2018 3:59:00 AM Wow you certainly bring your heartfelt poetry to the fore here, Ravi, So sad, yet beautiful poetry.. Login to Reply Ravi Sathasivam Date: 9/13/2018 1:13:00 AM Thank you very much for your comment on my poem Appreciated very much my dear friend.

Andrea Dietrich Date: 8/10/2018 5:35:00 PM Oh, it's so sad, Ravi. But sad poems make for very poetic verse! Login to Reply Ravi Sathasivam Date: 9/13/2018 1:13:00 AM Thank you very much for your comment on my poem Appreciated very much my dear friend.

Sara Kendrick Date: 8/10/2018 10:03:00 AM Ahh!! Sad one. Thanks for stopping by. Sara Login to Reply Ravi Sathasivam Date: 9/13/2018 1:14:00 AM Thank you very much for your comment on my poem Appreciated very much my dear friend.

Eve Roper Date: 8/10/2018 8:37:00 AM So very sad, Ravi, broken heart is a heavy feeling to feel.. It's like out in the ocean reaching for a life line that isn't there.. Good write my friend and thank you so much for your visits.. The older I get the memory seems to leave me; so if I don't visit right away for give me.. I do enjoy your writings. hugs dear friend. Login to Reply Ravi Sathasivam Date: 9/13/2018 1:14:00 AM Thank you very much for your comment on my poem Appreciated very much my dear friend.

Paul Callus Date: 8/10/2018 5:27:00 AM This is very sad, Ravi. Putting on a brave face will never manage to diminish the pain of lost love. You are able to involve the reader in your emotional thoughts. Regards // paul Login to Reply Ravi Sathasivam Date: 9/13/2018 1:14:00 AM Thank you very much for your comment on my poem Appreciated very much my dear friend.

Mystic Rose Rose Date: 8/10/2018 3:54:00 AM How sad when love departs and its all over. The memories then become all over to, I have enjoyed your poem this morning, have a great day Ravi. Login to Reply Ravi Sathasivam Date: 9/13/2018 1:14:00 AM Thank you very much for your comment on my poem Appreciated very much my dear friend.

Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 8/9/2018 2:11:00 PM - My heart is crying for your lost love, Ravi - A heartbreaking poem, beautifully written - Best wishes and hugs // Anne-Lise :) Login to Reply Ravi Sathasivam Date: 9/13/2018 1:14:00 AM Thank you very much for your comment on my poem Appreciated very much my dear friend. Hugsxxx

Besma Riabi Dziri Date: 8/9/2018 12:34:00 PM Gracious voice of poetry and a gracious reaction! A joy to read your beautiful write! Thank you so much for sharing. Be blessed. Login to Reply Ravi Sathasivam Date: 9/13/2018 1:15:00 AM Thank you very much for your comment on my poem Appreciated very much my dear friend.

Pandita Sietesantos Date: 8/9/2018 11:36:00 AM It is always sad when love leaves the heart! What a heartbreaking piece this is so reflective of the end of a love affair! Well done, my friend! Hugs. Pandita Login to Reply Ravi Sathasivam Date: 9/13/2018 1:15:00 AM Thank you very much for your comment on my poem Appreciated very much my dear friend.

Joseph May Date: 8/9/2018 10:49:00 AM A sad story of separation Ravi..Best wishes Login to Reply Ravi Sathasivam Date: 9/13/2018 1:15:00 AM Thank you very much for your comment on my poem Appreciated very much my dear friend.

Charlie Smith Date: 8/9/2018 10:37:00 AM So sad Ravi, Peace be with you... Login to Reply Ravi Sathasivam Date: 9/13/2018 1:15:00 AM Thank you very much for your comment on my poem Appreciated very much my dear friend.

Demetrios Trifiatis Date: 8/9/2018 9:04:00 AM The echo of a lost love reverberates in the heart still causing grief and regrets ! A wonderful write dear friend, Ravi! Login to Reply Ravi Sathasivam Date: 9/13/2018 1:15:00 AM Thank you very much for your comment on my poem Appreciated very much my dear friend.

Vijay Pandit Date: 8/9/2018 8:00:00 AM You depicted lost love so well with urgent emotions Ravi..it feels so real. I sincerely hope this is fiction. Well done, Ravi. Login to Reply Ravi Sathasivam Date: 9/13/2018 1:15:00 AM Thank you very much for your comment on my poem Appreciated very much my dear friend.

Richard Lamoureux Date: 8/9/2018 7:34:00 AM This is sad but poeticly expressed. I hope it is not your experience. Login to Reply Ravi Sathasivam Date: 9/13/2018 1:16:00 AM Thank you very much for your comment on my poem Appreciated very much my dear friend.