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Now I'M Gone

How could this happen to me? I was happy as could be! With u by my side so strong with your pride! How could this happen to me? How did this fight ever start? Your words have ripped out my heart! And now that your gone! i play our love song And cry many tears from my heart I loved you for real from the start Taking your life it broke my heart But we wont be together until i am never! These words i speak from the heart This time i will see it through! Because i am so very blue The times have been tough! now I've had enough! so this is The End of me too

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009




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Date: 10/7/2009 12:24:00 PM
Sad but nicely written poem Kirsty, thank you for sharing and a warm welcome to the Soup to you >> James
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Date: 9/24/2009 4:21:00 PM
wonderful poem kristy! as i read it i felt your passion, you're a great poet! keep it up!!!----Ell (P.S. welcome to poetry soup!! :)
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Date: 9/12/2009 10:00:00 AM
Hey Kristy, this is a very passionate piece, I can feel your pain and the grief. Well, love making is a wrong perception,. Getting addicted sometimes is a matter of choice, I hope you find true love again you can reach me via soupmail so we can talk better. Please keep writing. You are great! Welcome to poetrysoup. You will have fun and learn from great writers. Love, Adeleke
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Date: 9/8/2009 6:37:00 PM
Welcome to poetry soup, God bless, Sincerely John Moses
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Date: 9/8/2009 10:51:00 AM
Hi I wanted to take a moment to welcome you to Poetry Soup and to let you know that you will meet many wonderful people here through words. Poets are so sensitive. We encourage and uplift one another. I enjoyed reading your heartfelt sad poem, today. I pray you will feel happiness again even though it may be difficult after such a loss in your life. This, too, shall pass. God has plans for you. So, stick around. (Call 1-800-273-TALK (8255): Suicide hotline, 24/ 7 free. Lovingly, Dane
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Date: 9/8/2009 10:48:00 AM
Interesting poetry.
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Date: 9/8/2009 7:20:00 AM
Welcome to soup enjoy your time here. Very dramatic lost love poem. Sara
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Date: 9/8/2009 3:26:00 AM
Welcome to PoetrySoup Kirsty. Wishing you the best always. Love, Carol
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