Now I Unleash With Rum Rage

You see I had lots of respect

NOW you are begging for attention 
and a reality check, so try me,
Try me like satan tried jesus,

Your trying to unleash all that steam 
but you only sound like a tea kettle, 
you claim to be the rock of Gibraltar 
but your only a pebble, 

didn't your mother tell you not to play with fire, 
now I must burn you for pulling this dragons tale ,
no one wants to hear your fairy tale, its very frail, 
you can speak and speak until your face is pale 
but flattering your self with your words is of no avail. 

Keep checking your mail because karma is on it way,
I hope you can eat all that is on your tray, and when you 
stuffed with your own hatred ,I hope you get on you knees
and pray, not every thing in life can go your way,

didn't history teach you that 
dictating,
manipulating,
belittling,
lack of peace making,
heart breaking,
lack of loyalty,
unjust, 
disrespect,
neglect,
self indulgence 
hatred
lies
and bias
is not the way, 
well I am going to teach you today 

Adolf hitler ,
Maximilion,
Malcom x,
Martin luther king,
Rosa parks,
Allen Ginsberg,
Jesus Christ,
the little rock nine,
Mahatma Gandhi,
Fredrick Douglas,
Harriet Tubman,
Rodney King,
Elie Wiesel, 
Sean Bell,

DOES any of this ring a BELL,
or your self you continue to smell,
are you still under the devils spell,
how DARE  you be unjust,
teaching a child like you is a must. 
Your whole approach and appearance is stale,
but HEY 
I guess you don't see that 
because a donkey can't see its tail.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012



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Date: 9/28/2012 2:42:00 PM
i really loved this poem and its flow ...i like it when the words speak your mind...everything u wish u could say but u do say... to urself... sorry if thats too much.. great read..look forward to more :)
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Date: 6/19/2012 8:00:00 PM
this is really interesting stuff!! I thoroughly enjoyed the read. It reminds me a bit of when PD used to do slams on people here at Soup. But yours has a historical "flavor" to it also. Awesome.
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Date: 6/19/2012 6:40:00 PM
"Awesome... LOVED IT!!!! Xox0.. CARMA*SWEETHEART=RoCK On WITh THAT PEN Of YOURS ELLIOT!!! ;)"
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Date: 6/19/2012 2:56:00 PM
Ima send you some ciroc and see what that rage does lol Im tellin leroy you stole the glow SHO NUFF
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Date: 6/19/2012 4:34:00 PM
lol Thanks...I WILL..
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Date: 6/19/2012 4:31:00 PM
lol will...I WILL..
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Date: 6/19/2012 4:10:00 PM
Ask ink u script about leroy lol
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Date: 6/19/2012 3:20:00 PM
LOL KIND OF CONFUSED BRO.
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Date: 6/19/2012 3:00:00 PM
Whos leroy..lol
Date: 6/19/2012 1:11:00 PM
what a PUNCH LINE, elliott!... EDGY!!..whooo!..:) huggs
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Date: 6/19/2012 3:02:00 PM
Thanks nette!
Date: 6/19/2012 12:57:00 PM
Wooooooooooooooooooooow!!!!!
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Date: 6/19/2012 3:01:00 PM
Thank you facts see facts!
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