Now I Lay Me Down To Sleep

Everyday, to God I pray For answers to Life's enigmas Patience lays in wait to stay- To cleanse our Social Stigmas We pass the time in our idle Dreams: Like fallen Stars in singing streams

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Richard Lamoureux

Date: 3/6/2014 9:24:00 AM

I like the play on words. Bravo Chan! If you get a chance check out my poem "You Can't" it deals with Social Stigmas.

Just That Archaic Poet
Date: 3/6/2014 10:40:00 AM

Thanks, Richard; I will take a look at your piece in just a few. Always happy to have a visit from you :)

Robin Davis

Date: 2/21/2014 8:51:00 AM

Chan The Man This is a very unique and brilliant write. We all want to find the answers to life's questions, but sometimes it just takes a while. Nicely done Thanks for the amazing comment on my Two Friends And A Puppy poem. Hugs

Just That Archaic Poet
Date: 2/21/2014 10:54:00 AM

No prob, hon. Thanks for dropping by, Sweet Pea :)

Victoria Anderson-Throop

Date: 8/26/2013 4:30:00 PM

last line is lovely..."Like fallen Stars in singing streams"

Just That Archaic Poet
Date: 8/26/2013 5:59:00 PM

Thanks, hon :)