Premiere Contest WinnerNow and then

Peering back through misted glass.
You.
An intimately known stranger next to me.
Echo waves lap in and out of my mind...
Reality? Looped events pulsating.
Can't trust the cine film past. 
Click. Thud. Tapdancing on my heart.
Staccato feelings. 
Drop by drop I return to myself.
Phoenix.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2024

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Mcintosh Avatar
May 4, 2024 at 1:08 AM
Wonderfully done. So short and so breathtaking. A whisper and a sigh, a beauty that won't pass hearts by. God bless you and congrats on your top win. Love, Gina
North Avatar
May 4, 2024 at 1:10 AM
Thank you so much. I really appreciate your supportive comments.
Rodrigues Avatar
April 30, 2024 at 7:42 AM
Very emotive, Heidi!
North Avatar
April 30, 2024 at 1:36 PM
Thank you
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