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Now a Mall Walker

In my wildest dreams, never thought I'd be one But I'm now a mall walker, my life's come undone Mostly seventy or older No kids on our shoulders Decrepit but still cookin' before we succumb

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Lim'Rik Flats

Date: 12/9/2016 9:15:00 AM

Jack's a mall walker//And a big talker//watching girls go by//oh...my, my, my//Jack's a girl watcher. GOOD MORNING JACKSON!!! this is actually not a lim'rik, it's that song by the O'Kaysions. (sheesh, now it's stuck in my brain! Oh well, no worse than "Felice Navidad")

Jack Ellison
Date: 12/10/2016 8:00:00 AM

"Felice Navidad" my good friend! Don't know that song??? GOOD MORNING JOHN JOHN (24 hours later!!!)