Now a Mall Walker

In my wildest dreams, never thought I'd be one But I'm now a mall walker, my life's come undone Mostly seventy or older No kids on our shoulders Decrepit but still cookin' before we succumb
Copyright © | Year Posted 2016

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December 9, 2016 at 9:15 AM
Jack's a mall walker//And a big talker//watching girls go by//oh...my, my, my//Jack's a girl watcher. GOOD MORNING JACKSON!!! this is actually not a lim'rik, it's that song by the O'Kaysions. (sheesh, now it's stuck in my brain! Oh well, no worse than "Felice Navidad")
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December 10, 2016 at 8:00 AM
"Felice Navidad" my good friend! Don't know that song??? GOOD MORNING JOHN JOHN (24 hours later!!!)
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