Novembersummer

Midfall and nearly all the trees
Stand brown as broken sticks
Against a sky impossibly blue,
I in shirtsleeves a walking go
With love and longings as my companions
Kicking through the drifts of colored shards
Fallen with another Summer's stealthy fading
Feeling, marveling at this piece of heat
That dropped unnoticed from Her pocket.

I could believe today
In America untamed,
A place full of wild things and untamed peoples
A place where Spirit spreads
To ride the clouds
To sing its songs unhindered.

Nature has let down her locks today;
Who will look on her
To let themselves be consumed, entranced
By the beauty that lives on in spite of all our assaults -
Who will be distracted by the miracles we move through,
Feel the surge of the sea of life all around us,
Hear the whispered prayers
In the windsigh of the sleeping trees
Watch the sacred night come on
Announced by the rose glow behind the thumbnail moon -
Who will stand amid such things,
Yet not put aside for the moment
Those little cares we circumscribe our lives with,
To stand amazed to be here breathing,
Alive to feel how loving-close
Infinity holds us, claims us for its own;
Surely, not I alone.

I rest a hand on my sleeping child's chest;
Feel the heart fluttering beneath the skin;
I can sense a great wheel turning.

I wander out in the still warm darkness 
That follows this day,
To look up at the starstrewn sky
See that great wheel begin its turning,
Stand amazed to be here breathing.

Stand, amazed to be.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2006



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Date: 2/9/2011 5:45:00 AM
William....quite in the style of Walt Whitman....nice!!! jimbo
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Date: 4/4/2009 9:15:00 PM
William - Congratulations on having your poetry featured this week – God Bless, MJ
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Date: 4/4/2009 6:49:00 PM
Congrats on your beautiful poem being featured this week. God Bless Phyl
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Date: 4/4/2009 4:38:00 AM
Beautiful poem!
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Date: 4/2/2009 11:18:00 AM
I am enjoying this poem...congrats on being featured this week. Your imagery is very thought provoking, each stanza is loaded...well done -Jason
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Date: 4/1/2009 10:31:00 PM
Congratulations on your lovely poetry being featured this week..GB Always, Tyesha
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Date: 4/1/2009 11:32:00 AM
Terrific word choice and consequent imgery in this "brown as broken sticks," "drifts of colored shards," "windsigh of the sleeping trees," "rose glow behind the thumbnail moon"... and the opening stanza is perfect in it's immediacy of pulling ou in and establishng the pace of the piece.
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Date: 4/1/2009 5:59:00 AM
Congrats William on "Novembersummer" being featured. Vince
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Date: 3/30/2009 9:37:00 PM
Congratulations on being featured this week. A beautiful write. Smiles from Lolita
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Date: 3/30/2009 4:57:00 PM
Congratulations on your well deserved featured write of the week! Love, Shar
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Date: 3/30/2009 12:46:00 PM
Nice use of imagery to convey your thoughts. Congratulations on having your poem featured. Wishing you continued success with your writing. Karen
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