November's Nuance

the leaves float gently
gather at the whim of a breeze
                                      …envy the geese


a November rose
bows to shivering applause
			…one last curtain call


a lone Cardinal
mocks the fiery Maple
			…in motionless mime


a soft snow hushes
the sound of nature snoring	
				…on a silent night


the cat pounces
into the billowing leaves
			…a feline frolic


an old man rakes leaves
remembering younger days
			   …. the children wait

John G. Lawless
©10/27/2022

Copyright © | Year Posted 2022



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Date: 10/29/2022 8:01:00 PM
Really like the last two, John. Great stuff -- all of them, really. Thanks for cheering the 'Dark Month.' ~ June Bug
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Date: 10/28/2022 12:28:00 PM
November delight in your most creative lines and innovative formatting John. I always look forward to the innovation in your poems. Love the depth and subtle contrast of age and youth in the last stanza - truly artfully nuanced. Thank you for this inspiring late autumn, sable gem!
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John Lawless
Date: 10/29/2022 5:24:00 AM
Thanks for stopping to read and comment Sam. These are just reflections on walking in the city as the leaves fall and the wind makes them dance.
Date: 10/28/2022 11:16:00 AM
Very nice, John!
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John Lawless
Date: 10/29/2022 5:25:00 AM
Thanks Kim, good to here from you
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