November's Bronzing Glow

Detailing leaves of golden spiff 
I lean up close to take a whiff 
of turmeric colored leaves sublime 
and skies of ruby reds sweet wine 
Engaged upon the breeze my touch  
awaits the pinnacle's non such; 

Sharing space with a painters brush 
I sketch a new horizon's rush 
on a canvass virgin without blotch 
envisioned scenes of yellow scotch       
while up above  the skylark soars 
on sweet November's wing adore 

Inhaling salt and sea I breathe 
the very things of me that seethe 
embroiled in art to hearts content 
I hear falls bitter sweet lament 
she doesn't want to touch the snow,  
nor lose her natural bronzing glow.  


November 26, 2020
Lay November Poetry Contest
Sponsor: William Kekaula
Eight syllables per line (howmanysyllables.com)
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Kendrick Avatar
December 9, 2020 at 2:05 PM
A very descriptive and expressive winner. Way to go. Congrats...Sara
Kelii Kekaula Avatar
December 2, 2020 at 6:13 PM
Thank you for sharing a wondrous part of yourself, Pixie (forgive my misjudgment of the rules: 'aabbcc, aabbcc...' and not 'aabbcc, ddeeff...'), my compliments on your honorable placement, Aloha! William
Ranaweera  Avatar
November 30, 2020 at 1:36 PM
Impressively beautiful, Pixie!! Great imagery!!
Rose  Avatar
November 30, 2020 at 5:18 PM
Thank you for stopping by Newton, glad you enjoyed the verse, God bless
One Avatar
November 27, 2020 at 6:44 AM
Nice imagery Pixie and the flow to this is really good..
Rose  Avatar
November 27, 2020 at 10:28 AM
Thank you Silent One for reading and commenting. You are always so encouraging, God bless.
Pandit Avatar
November 27, 2020 at 4:54 AM
Beautiful glow in this awesome poem my friend. Wonderful flow to this splendid imagery honoring November, Vienna.
Rose  Avatar
November 27, 2020 at 10:27 AM
Hello Vijay, thank you for stopping by with your input, much appreciated. Have a great day.
Andresen Avatar
November 27, 2020 at 2:13 AM
- Beautifully written Pixie ... you painted it with the glow of autumn - Good luck in the contest :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Rose  Avatar
November 27, 2020 at 10:27 AM
Thank you Sunshine for commenting. I pray for a wonderful healthy Dec. as best as can be, take care
Krutsinger Avatar
November 26, 2020 at 4:57 PM
“Arts to heart’s content” - I feel you are singing my song, Pixie.
Rose  Avatar
November 27, 2020 at 10:27 AM
Thank you Caren for stopping by. Nice to hear from you.
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