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November's Bronzing Glow

Detailing leaves of golden spiff I lean up close to take a whiff of turmeric colored leaves sublime and skies of ruby reds sweet wine Engaged upon the breeze my touch awaits the pinnacle's non such; Sharing space with a painters brush I sketch a new horizon's rush on a canvass virgin without blotch envisioned scenes of yellow scotch while up above the skylark soars on sweet November's wing adore Inhaling salt and sea I breathe the very things of me that seethe embroiled in art to hearts content I hear falls bitter sweet lament she doesn't want to touch the snow, nor lose her natural bronzing glow. November 26, 2020 Lay November Poetry Contest Sponsor: William Kekaula Eight syllables per line (howmanysyllables.com)

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Date: 12/9/2020 2:05:00 PM
A very descriptive and expressive winner. Way to go. Congrats...Sara
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Date: 12/2/2020 6:13:00 PM
Thank you for sharing a wondrous part of yourself, Pixie (forgive my misjudgment of the rules: 'aabbcc, aabbcc...' and not 'aabbcc, ddeeff...'), my compliments on your honorable placement, Aloha! William
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Date: 11/30/2020 1:36:00 PM
Impressively beautiful, Pixie!! Great imagery!!
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Date: 11/30/2020 5:18:00 PM
Thank you for stopping by Newton, glad you enjoyed the verse, God bless
Date: 11/27/2020 6:44:00 AM
Nice imagery Pixie and the flow to this is really good..
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Date: 11/27/2020 10:28:00 AM
Thank you Silent One for reading and commenting. You are always so encouraging, God bless.
Date: 11/27/2020 4:54:00 AM
Beautiful glow in this awesome poem my friend. Wonderful flow to this splendid imagery honoring November, Vienna.
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Date: 11/27/2020 10:27:00 AM
Hello Vijay, thank you for stopping by with your input, much appreciated. Have a great day.
Date: 11/27/2020 2:13:00 AM
- Beautifully written Pixie ... you painted it with the glow of autumn - Good luck in the contest :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 11/27/2020 10:27:00 AM
Thank you Sunshine for commenting. I pray for a wonderful healthy Dec. as best as can be, take care
Date: 11/26/2020 4:57:00 PM
“Arts to heart’s content” - I feel you are singing my song, Pixie.
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Date: 11/27/2020 10:27:00 AM
Thank you Caren for stopping by. Nice to hear from you.

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