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November Sunset

hunters are long gone remaining deer are safe meadow is still in shock from the gunplay november sunset is a relief no more loud noises no more death bam! spoken too soon

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Date: 10/27/2022 1:24:00 PM
Kind of ruins the sunset or the sunset is the final shot.
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Caren Krutsinger
Date: 10/27/2022 4:20:00 PM
To me also!
Date: 10/27/2022 1:24:00 PM
oh, your ending shocked me, caren! so sad...
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Caren Krutsinger
Date: 10/27/2022 4:21:00 PM
My dad who had over 100 guns used to explain if they did not "weed the deer out, disease would get them". Eye roll.
Date: 10/27/2022 12:02:00 PM
I'm afraid so, Caren. And there's all those fireworks to go yet.
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Caren Krutsinger
Date: 10/27/2022 4:21:00 PM
I know they are right around the corner

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