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November Rain

it rained and night had turned

it seemed we couldn't escape
its cloak of heaviness

but little did it matter
beneath your umbrella
with you holding me close



AP: 1st place 2022
Copyright © | Year Posted 2022

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Lawless Avatar
November 11, 2022 at 5:28 AM
Line, this held me in its moment for several more. Beautifully done.
Gauthier Avatar
November 11, 2022 at 2:06 PM
Much appreciated, John ~ thank you
Rose  Avatar
November 11, 2022 at 3:02 AM
Your words are scented with deep remembrance and beauty. Love to you my dear :)
Gauthier Avatar
November 11, 2022 at 2:06 PM
Thank you so much, Mystic ~
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