Connie Pachecho Poet Ninette

November Humback Sightings In Hawaii

Off 
The coast
Of Maui 
The northern whales
Migrate to the shores
To sun and raise
Their newborns
Earlier
On

11/10/23
A November Ninette Poetry Contest
Sponsor-Andrea Dietrich

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Sara Kendrick November 26, 2023 at 6:02 AM Ahh!! What a wonderful sight to behold. Congratulations on this winning work in Andrea's contest. I enjoyed reading it. Way to go. Keep on writing. Sara K

Linda Alice Fowler November 25, 2023 at 2:18 PM So sweet an image Connie. Congratulations! :)

Andrea Dietrich November 23, 2023 at 8:32 PM I really liked this but 8th line needed to be only 2 syllables. I bet this is a beautiful thing to see. Congrats in my contest